rate_review Reviews

Oooo. That smut was hot!! :-) Haine does seem to like it rough (or ruff?) doesn't he? Good thing he's more durable than his appearance suggests!

And it's his birthday? I wonder if Lazard held onto that tidbit for a few days so he could tell them at just the right moment...

A sister?? Is she alive? Older or younger? Ooo! So cool!

More chapters...more smut! (Love Genesis and Haine together...maybe Zack and Angeal will start to loosen up?) I bet that birthday party will be Epic! Woo! :-)

I'd like to see Haine's reaction to the folder of his info and news of his sister.

Seeing this updated made my day. Thanks for lovely smut (despite the overabundance of Genesis' clothing).

Yay!!

Lovely chapter :-) Loved all the Angeal POV. And adored him taking Zack out to dinner ;-)

Woo hooo!

Nice chapter! It had sex, it had revelations, it had witty banter...I approve! *grin*

I have been trying to figure out who the eventual pairings might be...and I've kind of come to the conclusion that it might be manage a group? *laughs*

Darn that honor! Oh, it's an admirable thing and heaven knows it is an integral and important part of both Angeal and Zack...but my it can be a bit inconvenient when sex is on the line! :-) (And I feel even more sympathy for poor Seph!)

Wonderful :-) I'm already looking forward to the next chapter!

I absolutely ADORED this chapter. I have been waiting so anxiously hopeing and praying you would still continue. I'm sorry more peopel dont review. this is SUCH an AMAZING and WONDERFUL story. I LOVE it. and have reread what you have so far at least 4 times. and am planning to do so again!!!!
I really love it.

I think you are a great writer!!! dont give up!!!!

I loved this chapter. it moved me to tears in a couple of places. and the way you wrote it I felt like I was pulled in and 'There' I love heine... I truly do. hes such a cool and lovable character. so underused. heh/. but this chapter was SOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooo moving. I felt so strongly for heine and genesis. but then felt again sooo sad for gen with ang and heine with zack. I just LOVE the bond and love between these boys. and even the bond with seph that they are all developing.

I could go on and on.... honestly... I loved every bit of it. and will SOOO anxiously await more! I cant wait to see how things turn. especially with heine's admission to gen on his ability. I was getting a feeling that somethin was up. and still feel frustrated for heine for way back when he was hopeing zack would do more when they snuggled up for bed that time.

ohh. man.... I'm going to be checking all the time on here hehe.

or maybe I need to just re-search for you on ff.n I'm kirastastefultragedy on there. :)

please take care!!!! and know that your story is well loved. I have a friend that I have recomended it to. she just needs to make time to read it :D I KNOW she'l love it as much as me.

ABSOLUTELY positively SOAKED this in like a sponge and can NOT wait to read chapter 15 when you get it up!

I sooo love the loving and sweet comfortable way that they all interact, without feeling uncomfortable. I wish friends and family were that loving and cuddly all teh time. I know I am... but most people these days arent anymore. Its a sweet refreshing thing to read!

I love how much Haine has grown and the others also around him, and feel so bad for poor genesis...

seriously! I cant wait till you update again! *jumps excitedly* thank you for such a great story!!

Genesis holding Haine against the railing = HOT HOT HOT. Lol. Sorry, had to say it! Thanks for the update!

Cloud with Sephiroth was cute! :-)

Yay, Angeal's back! And...Genesis is having issues...oo, that's not good...*gives him a big hug*

Yay for updates!

*sniffles* I loved chap 13... it was so sweet and sad all in one. the scene with seph and cloud was really cute. definately do more. but I still feel so bad for haine. zack feels for him and he, for zack... but they cant communicate properly. and poor gen, 'tell angeal how you feel'!!! tee hee. Look forward to reading the next part!!!