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by KiraInANutshell

schedule May 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a good, solid plot that I look forward to reading more of. There simply is not enough Clack out there. I have a few questions though. Where is the rest of Avalanche? Wouldn't they try to rescue Cloud? How did Cloud get into this predicament in the first place? This is not a complaint I just would like to see it included in later chapters so I'm not as confused. Also, how can Seph/Cloud disgust you? To each his own I guess. I do love Clack though.
person Madisuzy
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love an evil Sephy!!!!!!!! And a Zack to the rescue!!!!! I hope you continue this, cause I'd love to read more.
schedule February 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story; I was quite sad when there wasn't a third chapter, I was all excited hahaha Keep up the good work =D
person Nakimora
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
KYAAA!! I love it XD I cant wait until the next chapter.
schedule February 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is great so far. :3 Can't wait to read more.