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February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have the weirdest boner right now XD
good job!
good job!
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
would love to see this pairing go all the way
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January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The concept interested me, and i got into it. the idea of chocobos thinking of cloud as a sort of god was very interesting. at first the dialog between the birds was kind of... odd,but understandable. i looked past it and kept reading. Rather than work up to a sexual encounter, you just jumped into it without much explanation, and your use of language is what made me not able to continue. The story does have potential, though.
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I say option B and Angeal/Cloud
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was... interesting. Really nice ideas you have there... it would be really a shame to leave it as a oneshot.
Pairing: I would love Sephiroth/Cloud as a final pairing.
Choose: B. Cloud getting kidnapped and bought by/Saved by Turks/Soldiers from an Underground Slave-Trade Ring.
Pairing: I would love Sephiroth/Cloud as a final pairing.
Choose: B. Cloud getting kidnapped and bought by/Saved by Turks/Soldiers from an Underground Slave-Trade Ring.
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February 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I vote Cloud is kidnapped and then bought by Turks/Soldiers, preferably Turks.
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmm...... it was certainly interesting t read. about ideas why don't you try cloud getting kidnap by seph, and make him call a best lover and try to punish him.
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this and would love you til the end of time if you turned this into a longer story.
I choose:
A. Discovered/Captured by the Turks/Soldiers who go on a mission to Neibel.
pairing: Angeal/Cloud or Genesis/Cloud or Tseng/Cloud
I choose:
A. Discovered/Captured by the Turks/Soldiers who go on a mission to Neibel.
pairing: Angeal/Cloud or Genesis/Cloud or Tseng/Cloud