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for A Father's Love

by trabeck89

schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ahahaha i really like your ending's ease and humorous brushstrokes! still, chapter 7 is the best!
schedule April 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
While I'm no pro at writing, I would have enjoyed this story much more if it had not been in an "RP" format..it makes it seem like you didn't want to take the time to actually write it out.
schedule March 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once again great chapter. *anxiously awaits update to avoid english homework*
schedule March 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
@~@ it always makes me so sad when I chapter ends and there isnt more for me to read yet... lol Can't wait for the next update
schedule February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw. it makes me kind of sad. But in a good way you know? Like I feel sad for Laguna since he thinks Squall hates him completely and all. I enjoyed it. Can't wait for the update. ^^