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Pleeease continue this! It's so beautiful and I love how you describe Cloud's emotions.
It's really wonderful. (well, not the emotions that are being described, but how they're described, heh. xP)
And either option would be amazin! :)

Poor little, messed up Cloud. His insecure mind is a desperate and desolate place, and it looks like he's about to implode from the stress. I'd love to see this continued in whatever way you decide. ~_^.

HOLY CRAP that was amazing! So sensual and beautiful! And YOU can't find a beta reader? I know plenty who put muuuuuch less effort into their work who I've beta'd for. You are amazing, and I want you to know, this story made my night. You're EFFing amazing. I'd pay a pretty penny for you to continue this. Not even for the sex, not even for the lust (well, maybe a little for the lust), but for the sheer pleasure you gave me and the inner inspiration that was rekindled just by witnessing the magnificient progression in such beautiful characters. Thanks much!

Ooh, I'll keep reading even if they don't have sex, though that'd be a bonus. Fabulous and adorable story <3
Another thing; though I don't think you're in dire need of one since I didn't notice any mistakes, but I'd like to be your Beta if you want.

Option A, please.
(aweseome fic btw!)

There are so many things I can call you for just leaving us with that cliffhanger....

But because your fic was so freakin' awesome, I'm gonna refrain from saying them, ha ha ha. Thank you for sharing "Make Today Special"! Sounds hella awesome so far.

I think both paths are fine and each would bring an interesting perspective but...

I guess (a) would be my choice (I want a virgin!Cloud who is then sexually victimized before Zack can comfort him but, well, that works too).

Regardless of your choice, do know I'll read it (eventually - tests are starting up now and well... Tests suck) even if I forget to review xD

I vote for option number 2 lol Although Im slightly confused so if you can explain option 2 to me that'd be great =] I really like this story. It truly captures Cloud's nervous and closed off nature. Zack is perfect, he's funny and sweet; exactly how he should be. Dude, no one can write a kiss scene better than you. I was like AWWWWWWWW throughout the whole thing. It was so visual that I could see everything and it actually made me feel the connection between them; how much Zack loved Cloud. Please please please continue =]

Please go on with this, I love it. Although I don't really mind which option you choose, I guess I would choose option...B. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

This is hard. Both endings are terribly tragic and angst ridden and that's what I really wanna read. I say a little of both. No actual bum boinking but anal fingering and a little fellatio to Cloud would be satisfying. Then of course he passes out and leaves Zack with a certain problem but before Cloud can make it up Sephiroth does his insanity thing. Thus leaving Cloud unloved, feeling like a loser, and Zack being torn at watching his almost lover in the hands of Hojo. Or you can just do A as long as there is some boinking at some point.

Omg, that was great for the first chapter. Ooh, the options are limitless... but Im going to vote for option B, because making Hojo be guilty for something makes me feel better. lol.