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for Don't Bet Against Cloud

by TziegMadara

schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I immediately pictured Lazard as the one watching. -stares blankly as a rabid plotbunny bites her ear- OW!

Lazard/Sephiroth?

Perhaps even Sephiroth enters the office while Lazard was peering out the window in shock... -cackles-
person Anon
schedule May 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love you, I love this, ahhh. *foams at the mouth* You know, I was honestly expecting it to be Zack or Sephiroth. First two who came to mind. Not really sure though; you're the magic worker. Can't wait for more. 5/5!!
schedule May 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked the 1st chapter... and was ecstatic to see a 2nd now. I loved it! and I definately think you should do a 3rd part.

At first I thought it was zack that would have been watching. But now I'm thinking it should be sepheroth!!! Dun dun dunnnnn (group fun anyone!?...he he *evil grin*)

ohh and hats off to you... cloudXangeal is definatly a little bit different... yet you made it flow really well! and the idea of zackXgenesis.. is AWSOME!
person Vidori
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It may be cliche, but it could be Sephiroth who is jealous that Angeal was with someone else, paving the road for an argument between him and Angeal or him and Cloud and a possible angst or non-con scene OR a threesome... Sorry, I got carried away. Good job so far! Thanks!
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.... ^_^ I loved part 1, and part 2 was just as good, if not better. I look forward to the next section!
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Loving it so far!

As for who saw Angeal and Cloud, I vote Seph or Reno!
schedule March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Cloud seducing Angeal: Win plan! This story is amazing, makes me wanna look for more CloudxAngeal fics. :D Good job!
schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Uh, yeah, there's interest! *Hands you a round TUIT* Please??

That was fun and hot and such a TEASE! Loved it!
schedule March 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful....
Cloud's logic was great! Angeal won't kill Genesis... I am sure, but I am also certain that his childhood friend won't get off easy as well.