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May 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story. I love how you managed to keep Yuna IC, and managed to capture the feeling of Shiva, which can be hard. All in all, very good!
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April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I always did like the potential here, given how Yuna comes out every time so weak but you have no idea what she does while in there. Great job in describing beyond the mere act, and especially for jumping on a creative angle since there's been such a long spell of rarely anything unique worth reading.