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for Undeception.

by SprocketCamelot

person TypeZero
schedule April 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, nice. I love this pairing and what you've done with them. Keep writing please!
schedule April 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this.
It's short... but I was still involved enough to CARE about the ending and how things turned out.
I particularly enjoy the way you provided enough hints about thier past together to provide a level of interest beyond just smut... without going into more detail than necessary for a one-shot. Well done.