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by schwaerze

person crayonbox
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you just showed me a pairing (a damn hot pairing) I never thought of or even seen in fanfiction.
Great job on the slutty Yazoo. Most slutty Yazoo's are writtn horribly, but somehow you make it fit. I kind of feel sorry for Reno. Yazoo has surpassed him in sluttiness in my opinion. :P
Angael as agressive, honorable, i-will-avenge-my-son..eh...avenger is delicious. Although I still curse him for what he made Zack do in CC, I kind of like how you twisted him in making Yazoo his little toy. Or trying too.
I'm going to read the sequel now. :D
person fyrbyrd074
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah just what I needed to get me out of my flu funk. Worst flu I've had in years really got me down. but this makes me all happy again. Naughty Yazoo can be such a bitch and I love when he is. Love him any way I can get him really....Ta
person Rina76
schedule April 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wicked schoolboy Yazoo is soooooo hawt... *cue pervy panting* I love when he calls Angeal 'daddy of my ex-boyfriend'! Bitchy-hitchy XDDD

Very raunchy backseat anger-sex. I mean, you'd have to have a cruel heart to dump poor lil Zacky. It was good to see Yaz get paid back for being such a wanton slut. Go Angeal! ^^

And go Schwaerze for breaking new ground and doing a new pairing! *hi-fives you* I know how hard it is to think of something that hasn't been done already so you get tons of points for that. *nods*