rate_review Reviews

ooooooooooh a most fascinating AU!!!! very curious to see how the world has changed!

do tell more!

PS: turk cloud = sexy!

I like it a lot and it worked... Reno as the odd Random factor, who changed things for the better, loved the way you weaved everything together. Personally without the Redhead, I don't think the story would have worked at all! G

Ohh my freakin' gosh... I SOOoo loved this. what an AU in the end. so awsome. You MUST absolutely MUST expand on this new world. LOVEEeeeee it!

seriously, that was a definate constant cliff hanger... the whole thing was. every time his time and place would change I thinki I stopped breathing before reading on. and the ending definately made me tear up!

very awsome story that you should build on! and quite original indeed as well!

An intriguing story! I liked it...the very pragmatic Reno going where Angels fear to tread! :-) I am glad that his adventure seemed to go well! All are alive...only he is banged up (though Genesis is in the next bed...) Yay!

This is amazing. Every piece of it is perfectly conveyed and tied together. I would adore seeing the full extent of the changes and more of the interactions between the changed characters, but I can also see this as a complete work. This is one of the most original takes on the time-travel concept I've ever seen, and it works phenomenally well. Don't you dare ever give up on your writing; it would be a tragic loss for all of us. XD

~Zig