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by sephcounttheways

schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Angeal is here!

LOVE that Vincent is Satan! He was just delicious :-) No wonder Genesis keeps going and visiting him ;-)

I can't wait to see what happens with Angeal...and if Zack regains any more of his mind. He was such a sweet human... :-)
person satterb
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Shit! I thought you'd died and rolled off the edge of the earth! I love this story, and I was turned off a little by Zack's lack of mental capacity, UNTIL you gave us Angeal! God love you! Now there's someone to temper poor Zack. I hope Cloud can handle the jealosy. Thanks for updating.
schedule November 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. The characters are so nicely developed, yet some how they remain close to their cannon selves. Angeal is flirting with the dark side, Zack is a nut, Cloud's a brat trying to prove himself, Sephiroth's in charge (sorta), Genesis is the one who corrupted them all, and some how it's all Vincents fault:D I had a feeling he'd be satan, that or Genesis sire. As for who God is, I have my theories. Thank you for the update. I can't help but wonder if you'll ever draw a picture for this fic.

PS Am I the only person who finds it ironic that the name of your story is "The Recruiters" and you updated on Veterans Day?
person Rillian
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was fantastic! I love this story and how you're steadily introducing more characters. Zack cracks me up, he really does. I wonder if now that Angeal is in the picture, Zack will mellow out and find the "sanity" that he lost during the change? But he is adorably crazy like this. And Vincent as Satan! Who else? Still, his appearance does make it seem like there's going to be a larger plot to this.
Or maybe I'm reading too much into it. I can't wait until you update again!
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates! That was seriously different from the last few chapters. And I must say when I read your note at the end all I could keep thinking and saying was 'OH MY GOD XD'. Can't wait for more!
person Kitsune3
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yet another good chapter. It's about time that angeal showed up!
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is very interesting, and Zack's absolutely hilarious! I had to keep pausing every few moments out of embarrassment for the poor guy. lol Can't wait for the next update! Love your work, as always!
person Yume
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Angeal. Except, angeal has too much honor to be a good vampire.
XD
But A good puppy needs a good master. Zack is adorable. Totally puppy like.
I think it would be interesting to add vincent in as an older vampire, perhaps even a stronger vampire from hell, to look after their little coven? Or perhaps they rescue him from crazed scientists wanting to discover just what makes a vampire tick, in a more modern age...

...Hn. I'm sorry. Ignore me. I shall just continue reading your lovely ideas quietly, and be a good little rabid fangirl and sit in a corner.
person Mizu-Benten (Not Signed in due to laziness)
schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BEST. FUCKING. STORY. EVER.

And that's all she wrote. Oh, well; I salivate at your feet until an update arrives. That, too.
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I cannot even begin to express how amazing this story is. The sex is great but it is nothing compared to how phenomenal the plot you've developed is. Your Genesis is exactly how I see him and it is so rare to find a portrayal that focuses on his character and not just how he appears in Crisis Core when he's at the end of his rope and half out of his mind. Zack's story was heart-rending and flawless and I adore how you made him so real and perfect. He is by far my favorite character and you've done him such justice. Completely was not expecting for him to lose his mind, but it makes sense and I can't wait for his sanity to catch up with him so we can see his real reaction to what's happened. :D And as for who's next... I can't tell you how much I wish it would be Angeal. I would just love to see Zack break through his defenses and 'corrupt' him in that sweet Zacky way. Reno's cute and all, but not really someone I can see Zack really falling for... Whatever you come up with, I'm sure it will be perfect. ^.^ I'm going to be completely selfish now and tell you to hurry up and update! I want MOAR! <3