rate_review Reviews

Hm...any particular kind of pairing you are looking for? Anything you would prefer to avoid? Personally I prefer Reno NOT to be paired with Rude.

Ooo...Cloud/Rude? That kid would never learn to talk...Sorry! Thinking out loud there...

Tseng actually is an interesting thought for Cloud. Of the friends of Sephiroth, and of Zack, he's pretty much the only one still alive.

Uh...my other thought was also a Turk/Cloud pairing...my mind must be in a frame! *grin*

I am enjoying this story, it is quite well written! :-)

I'm confused. I swear this was in the Cloud/Seph section. Did you move it? I hope this is still a Cloud/Sephiroth fic. Anywhoo glad to see an update. Cloud in drag is always worth a chuckle, especially when he's preggers. You mentioned you wanted other couples to be suggested. Well Vincent/Cid is always fun and honestly if you're going this far from cannon (all m-pregs are) I think you should consider bringing Genesis into the fray. After all he's not dead, just... well I guess he's in hiding. Actually I'd kinda like to see him with Tifa. I've never seen that before and I think they'd make an interesting couple. All good yaoi stories have at least one cute het couple. They just have a really hot gay couple as the main characters.

As for formatting issues, well, try copying and pasting. You still get to use your comp. program with spell check but you just copy and paste onto AFF using the typing option instead of downloading. I've never had an issue and it‘s not time consuming.

Personally, I really liked the breakup scene! Tifa and Cloud do seem a bit too much like brother and sister for me to ship them, myself :-)

So...really good so far! I wonder who the father is...and if Cloud will kill him when he finds out...or is this going to be more of a romance?

I look forward to seeing what happens next! :-)

Hhhmmmmmmmm... this is and intriguing start. Normally when Cloud is pregnant it happens before the events of FF7 or sometimes after AC. i've never seen one during and directly after FF7. I would like to see where this goes. Especially just how Cloud got preggers. I'm assumimg it was the natural way and since this story is under Cloud/Seph and assume the later is the other daddy. Update soon.

Loved the beginning. Hope to see more soon!