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November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story, I really did. I wanted to love it though but I couldn't because the author decided to go with the angry black male stereotype. Portions of the story were completely ruined for me because that certain character, that could have been something meaningful, was instead your typical portrayal of a black guy. For such a nice author it was sad to see this route taken with chcharacter.
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oops. So...now Cloud knows of more of the secrets that have been withheld from him....
And Meija's awake!
But the clones are dead. Somehow that is not comforting enough!
And that job sounds horrific for someone who doesn't find that fun! (It's very close what I do for a living, LOL! But I like it!)
And Meija's awake!
But the clones are dead. Somehow that is not comforting enough!
And that job sounds horrific for someone who doesn't find that fun! (It's very close what I do for a living, LOL! But I like it!)
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo!
Graves is close!! I do hope he gets that jerk!
And finally there is some fun for Zack on his vacation! I do wonder if Tseng is having one too...*grin* Oh, is he spending it with...Reno? *double grin*
Poor Cloud. That job is not for him...and his headache makes me ache with him :-( *hugs him*
Yay for two chapters!!
Graves is close!! I do hope he gets that jerk!
And finally there is some fun for Zack on his vacation! I do wonder if Tseng is having one too...*grin* Oh, is he spending it with...Reno? *double grin*
Poor Cloud. That job is not for him...and his headache makes me ache with him :-( *hugs him*
Yay for two chapters!!
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seriously...they spend all that time together and they're bound and determined Zack isn't to know about what happened to Cloud 'lest he run off after Meija...and no one figures that they're together and that perhaps telling Cloud that his boyfriend was sent "on assignment" or something would be a good idea?? And they call themselves Turks!
Can't wait to see what happens next...
Can't wait to see what happens next...
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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Poor Cloud...Poor Zack! Why doesn't Zack just tell Tseng that he figured out what happened (or near'bouts)? Say Cloud talked in his sleep during a nightmare...it's kinda true.
Why are they sending him away when Cloud needs him??? *sigh* Guess I'm just going to have to keep reading!
Why are they sending him away when Cloud needs him??? *sigh* Guess I'm just going to have to keep reading!
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September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The shower was so sweet and loving :-)
Sephiroth wondering what to do with an unconscious cadet in his hallway was amusing! :-)
...Cloud has lost track of days? Oh, dear...
*wishes Graves good hunting*
Sephiroth wondering what to do with an unconscious cadet in his hallway was amusing! :-)
...Cloud has lost track of days? Oh, dear...
*wishes Graves good hunting*
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...powerful chapter, especially that end bit with Graves...
Poor Cloud, he has been through so much :-( And so have several of the others. I hope their lives improve! Soon! :-)
Poor Cloud, he has been through so much :-( And so have several of the others. I hope their lives improve! Soon! :-)
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that Reno is a pretty deep and serious guy, isn't he? :-)
Poor Cloud...
Poor Zack, too.
A very angst-ridden but enjoyable story :-)
Poor Cloud...
Poor Zack, too.
A very angst-ridden but enjoyable story :-)
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September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooh! cloud thought he could be slick! wasnt expecting zack's awesome sniffing abilities.
awesome fic. i was reading it before, and then my comp crashed. as soon as i got it running again, first thing i did was look for an update on this.
awesome fic. i was reading it before, and then my comp crashed. as soon as i got it running again, first thing i did was look for an update on this.
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG... poor poor kunsel. I loved this chapter. yet I hated it... makes me feel so frustrated for the characters, you pull us into the story to FEEL what the characters feel!
I love it!
and look forward to rereading more :P and reading more on ff.n too :P hehe I know... I'm bad.
I love it!
and look forward to rereading more :P and reading more on ff.n too :P hehe I know... I'm bad.