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for Malady

by ZiggyPasta

schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's rediculous how much I love this story lol I was in a slump recently with my other 2 fanfics (which aren't ZxC but still!) and as soon as I read this my brain was going nuts. It's been a long time since a story has really caught my attention and conveyed every single feeling. Like, I can honestly feel everything. The way you have expressed each character's individual emotion is beyond phenomenal. The pain, sadness, happiness, and love are powerful emotions and you have captured the pureness of them. I'm not one to leave reviews but you deserve many because of how much effort you have put into this and it shows. Absolutely amazing, I don't know why you're hits aren't as high as some but I can tell you now that people are missing out if they aren't reading this. Keep doing what you do, can't wait for more =]
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I may have found it and read it on ff.n but I still wanna support your story here too!!! :P

19... at the end... when you hear mejia's line... "why if it aint my little fuck" ugh... gives me goosebumps rereading it even. mejia may be sick... but hes cool in his own bad boy kindof way... I fee;l bad for ratcliff still too.....

And just the absolute terrifying situation for cloud.... and thinking everything over and putting minself down.... ugh... Poor thing.... I can't wait to reread more :D and see new chapters too!!! *hugs ya*

take care!!!
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my OH MY.. Oh no OH NO!!! not again. poor cloud :(

sheesh.. poor ratclif too... :(

man... all these boys need each other soo badly and they are all so busy and distracted!

I SOOo look forward to the next chappy! I love each one!!!
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT! some great twists... I loved hearing some back story on graves and ratcliff!!!

and zack and cloud are sooo timid and cute... but ;) cloud is a little minx in hiding isnt he :)

I was so happy to read more than one new chapter! I wish many more would review your story! I know they would LOVE IT! keep up the great work. Its an exciting and emotional story! *hugs*
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good, fun, sweet, and sad story all in one.

I feel bad for graves for him to have run off in such an extreme move. But I also feel bad for ratcliff for different reasons.

I cant wait to read a new chappy... the title includes bittersweet, and I think that almost describes the entire story. But so well written *smile* keep it up! its a beautiful story! Can't wait for more!!!

ohh... and kunsel in the end was quite funny! :P
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was soo happy to see the updates! I love the way the story is growing. zack is opening up so happily to the new relationship. but poor cloud! I hope he become stringer , fast... for poor zack. and its so sad still.. about Elici
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. I'm in love with this story! I'm really glad you have written it and are posting it! its quite amzing. and I will wait happily to read more!!! I'm really anxious to find out what happens

It was so heartbreaking about Elici... A father... and husband. and so sweet to cloud too. He was a really sweet addition to the story. but I love the comraderie and the friendship between the cadettes... and cant wait to see how friendships and Zack and clouds relationship grow.

I really enjoyed it!!