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Pffffft hahahahahahahahahahaha.

This is great. I'm laughing so much it's bringing tears to my eyes. Keep it up and can't wait for the next chapter.

I like it and look forward to the next chapter!

I'm glad my little review helped you in your endeavors. This story just got even better... worse.... how does one compliment a crack fic? Anyhoo just thought I'd let you know Jerry Lou’s never admit they are perfect. That would be bragging and they never brag. They are modest, sweet, charming, handsome, and perfect in everyway. Think Mary Poppins with a penis. Also I think it’s Wutainese, Wutaian or simply Wutai. In the end does it really matter? I look forward to the next fix.

Well it's definately a crack fic. I look forward to how this will pan out. I hope to see Cloud being all Jerry Lou ish and Vincent making a killing in the BBQ industry

It's nuts. I like it.