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for Paternal Affairs

by crunchysalad

person satterb
schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Classic finish to this story. and by the way....where have you been????? Thanks for sharing once again. I've really missed you. I hope to see you hit some more of your stories, but we all know real life gets in the way. Thanks again!!!!!!!
schedule March 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aa~ this will sound terrible, but I've read this several times over, I'm so in love with it~! I love Seifer/Laguna fics and this one is the best by far. I hope when you find the time you may finish it, I would love to know what happens next. <3
person nivell
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seifer is such a goddamn slut! Can't keep it in his pants, that boy. But Squall did end up fucking with Irvine so I guess all three characters are just whores, lol! (Love your Seifer/Squall and Seifer/Laguna scenes btw.) While I wish that the story would end up Seifer/Squall, we all know that horny tom cat would want to fuck Laguna too so it'll probably end up with Squall and Laguna having to share a seme, haha! Can't wait for the next part and hope you write more FF8 stories!
person william
schedule December 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I dunno how it should end xD
I kinda feel as if Squall should really hate both of them, but i'm a sap for good, happy endings as well. & then again the perv in me wants it to end in a threesome xD but just given the dynamics of the story i dont think that would make for a good ending since..it just wouldnt mkae any sense xD
so i'm kinda torn. i think it should be something other than the given choices. but i don't have any real suggestions. Seifer shouldnt be such an ass though >>
person Imari
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd like #2 of the 4 options please. XD Purely because I think Seifer and Laguna should suffer.

Lovely story by the way looking forward to reading more soon.
person Selim
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o~o ooh, didn't notice this had updated and listening to "Eyes on Me" while reading made it all the more interesting while purely coincedental. Great chap-- no awesome chapter. Nice to see Squall stew on everything for a chapter (even though I'm not a fan of IrvinexSquall I like your story so just skimmed it, Squall wasn't interested so woot again). I'd totally go for incestous but that's cause it's bloody rare now-a-days to find a good FF8 fic. Hope to see more from you eventually :D

-Selim
person Madisuzy
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Squall. I do feel a little sorry for him, but I have to say I'd like to vote for number 3!!

3. Squall forgives both and they end up in an incestuous threesome

I can't help it... there's just so much hotness in that threesome and it leaves everyone happy... well, I hope Squall would be happy with having Seifer and Laguna... god knows I would LOL! Anway, whatever you choose to go with, I'm sure it will be great and I'll be waiting to read it! Thanks for the great story!!
person Appple
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, from the way you've written Squall I don't think he'd jut readily forgive Seifer. But at the same time it'd be horrible if everyone ended alone.): What about... And ending where Laguna and Seifer get together and Squall and Irvine get together? :D I know he wasn't exactly... satisfied with him, but then everyone could be happy? I dunno. I also have an extreme weakness for IrvinexSquall, so that might be a reason as well, lol
person Monet
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well I would really love to see you do all the endings but I won't be that greedy and I know you have better things to do in real life ^0^ I think you should do something like 1 and 2. I can't see 3 happening even though it's hot. I think Seifer and Squall will break up and Seifer ends up with Laguna. Have you ever seen Sabrina the teenage witch? The episode where she had her and Aaron's soul stone and they were a 95%match but it was Harvey she had the 100% match? That's what I think Squall + Seifer = 95% and Laguna + Seifer = 100%. Sex is a very powerful and intimate act. And Seifer and Squall were almost on the same wavelength "almost". ^0^ I hope you do this one or number three is you won't ^0^

person Divanora
schedule November 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Incestous threesome!! Of course, they both have to do a whole lot of grovelling for forgiveness first ;)