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for Schwarz Mitternacht

by trabeck89

schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:o So chapter six definitely wasn't something I expected to happen. However I still loved it. Now to just read the nest updates. :D
schedule August 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Reno and Vinny!!!! D: I was quite sad at what happened to them however it did make for some interesteing writing. I loved chapters 7 and 8 as much as I love all of your fics. However, the cliffhanger at the end was super mean >_< Can't wait for the update!!! :D
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved chapter four!! However I was a bit sad when Alphonse cut Hilde's hair D: Need to finish chapter five and can't wait for the next update :D
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:D Enjoyed chapter five as well ^-^ Can't wait for chapter six!!! You guys always write so that I am eager to read more!! lol I will patiently await an update.
schedule July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry it took so long for me to read this. I got the notices in my email. but have been so busy :)

It is so orginal. I was soo saddened by the first chapter. It was so utterly heart wrenching... poor Axel.. and Poor Reno... :(
But I *squee*was sooooo happy to see ZECHS!!!!!! gods... I'm such a gundam wing fanatic and ALWAYS HAVE BEEN!!!!! its sooo great to see that you crossed over fave characters from all thee great things!!! I'v wanted to do a gwing/ff7 cross for a long time.

This story is very moving... beautiful and well done! I love it!! and look forward to reading more!!! take care guys!
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It has been years since I have read a story that has touched my heart so much that it made me cry. I have only read the first chapter so far and I broke down into tears as Axel was dying. Idk how you did it, but the raw emotion I felt was phenomenal. Heck, my nose is still stuffy! Never ever ever ever has any fanfiction ever made me cry like this one. You hit the emotions dead on. Although it was very tragic, at least he was going somewhere safe and Reno was reassuring him. Hell I'm thinking about it now and crying! lol But I just wanted to say that you are an amazingly talented author who can strike the very core of a reader.
schedule July 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Definitely enjoyed chapter two and three. And as always I just can't wait to read more
schedule July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

As I come from Germany, your 'translations' hurt my eyes. If you don't speak German, don't use it. The translations are just plain arkward and wrong. Sorry, I just had to tell you this.

Frühling

PS.:If your title was supposed to mean Black midnight, then it's "Schwarze Mitternacht"
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This although it made me cry... I await the next update to read. I always enjoy the fics you write. ^-^