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for Lesson 4

by schwaerze

person fyrbyrd
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I'm such a Yazoo whore!!! You know my answer to that question..... Angeal getting all hot and bothered over dear Yazoo, Oh yeah.
It also shows that the Nazis don't really look at how many reviews we actually do get, which is not that many anyway, what right to they have to say that. I got a shock recently to get another reviewer besides yourself. Your reviews make my weeks, not days. Never fail to make me happy and lol, even if I read them at work and I get funny looks from the lady I work with. I wish I could write reviews like you do.
I tend to not review those people who threaten not to go on until they get a certain amount of reviews, that's just plain childish. But if it's a good story and they beg because they feel like giving up, them I try to if I can, well here and mm.org.
But It's me who'll do the begging....more please, please, please, please, please, with Yazoo cherry on bottom.....
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love these lessons! :-)

And did I catch a hint of Sephiroth and Zack having an assignation of their own?? Woo!

Yazoo and Angeal are just so cute...and awkward...together :-) Please write more!! :-)

Yay!
person crayonbox
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nonononono, don’t end it there. This chapter seriously made me wonder whether Zack is well endowed or not, considering he had troubling finding himself in his pants.
Glad Angael can’t let Yazoo go (do they both have an exhibitionists streak?? the car and now the gym... ) and now they’re going on a date. (*kyaaaa noice*) So nooo, don’t end it there. I want to see the date. I want to know whether Zack and his buddies will appear… or if Seph appears…
(Will there be a future Seph/Zack? If Seph ever finds out Angael is secretly dating his son, will our Silver haired general get himself a bite of puppy?)
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This better NOT be the end! What about Zack and Sephiroth? And I want more Angeal/Yazoo smuttastic action! Please? Pretty please with sugar and whipped cream and chocolate sauce on top?