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for A birthday treat

by NarrisaGrant

schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD wow Zack, I don't pity you in the least, bad pet! at least all worked out well in the end. I'm glad Cloud had a very happy birthday.
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bad Zack!! How dare you try to throw the world off balance!!XD

The nurse's uniform was a nice touch!! We know Angeal is probably gonna punish him more when they're alone!!XD

Another great job!!:D
person Cindyip
schedule September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just the way I like my Cloud. On the bottom where he belongs.

Bad Zack for going against the laws of nature:)
schedule September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You found me here too!! I thought that you were just going to be on ff.net...lol. This was one of my favorites that you started out with. I am soo happy that you are branching...lol. Great read and as always, sinfully delightful.