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for A perfect bottom

by NarrisaGrant

schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm going to have to read everything you've written... yep I've decided it's a requirement. exceptionally hot and fantastic, thank the gods you are generous with your writings and let us enjoy them too.
schedule January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story! The "Interview and After" is good too but this is definately my favorite of the two. I liked watching Cloud slowly get made into a sub...
person Cindyip
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy ending:)
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...so Zack is a closet submissive...kinda figured he'd be either a submissive bottom or submissive seme!XD Genesis is so manipulative!XD Hope Angeal likes his gift!:D

I really like thte relationship between Sephiroth and Cloud. It's not lovey dovey, but not sick and twisted to where it would make people cringe in disgust. I find it hard to believe that anyone would flame your stories. But I'm gonna totally read your stories! Keep up the good work!:)


Btw, thanks for reading and reviewing my JechtKuja oneshot! Really appreciate it!:)
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For chapter 7
Christ??? Was he actually questioning him in his sleep? How honest those answers were and oh so devoted Cloud is to Sephiroth. Honestly, I'd be hard pressed not to remain devoted to a man like that either. I think I actually felt my own heart ache with the thought of Sephiroth leaving for a battle or what not...but the sex, the kiss at the end....*sighs* they truly do understand one another, which makes them utterly perfect, a pair who is in love on such a different level then I have ever read before. You can come on the third bite? Wow, just wow! Well onto chappy 8, and yeah I saw you on ffnet. *winks*
Lots of love your way, you brilliant writer you! <3
-Lys :D
schedule October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL....oh well then, hard on command! Dang, who would have thought that a few words from the sexy General and little Cloud was sporting an instant hard on! This chapter was a tease and as much as I felt bad for Zack, I am a painfully selfish for Cloud to only be touched and spoiled by Sephiroth! So, then, I wonder...do they actually like each other or does it border on love tooo? *bounces excitedly* Either way I love it and I've become attached to this story in more ways then one. Like I've said before, Sephiroth is a sexual power house, and is a man who had a right to use his power to bend anyone's will and that's incredibly HOT!
Thanks for a good chappy...till next time!
-Lys :D
person Cindyip
schedule October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*whimpers* Seph and Cloud, so lovely although hope nothing happens to Seph on his mission:)
person Cindyip
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*claps* bravo, just bravo
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm I'd say Sephiroth could definitely look after what he owned...woooboy! This just keeps getting hotter! The way he talks to Cloud, it's so clear that he doesn't want to prevent or stop him from his pleasure, but that he wants Cloud to do exactly what he wants...and wow, that's fricken powerful! And really, who wouldn't want that lovely length before your eyes and the most amazing man ever, literally blissful after a good BJ hahahahahahaaha! This was fabo-licky-yummy-sexy-licious!!! Seriously, Seph and Cloud are my move favorite pairing...save for Reno and Tseng and you write them so well it makes my heart race....literally! YESSSS, this was goooooooood!!!!!
I will continue to give you much praise...you so well earned it in my eyes...and I can't wait to see more... *holds chair eagerly*
Laters!!
-Lys :D
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have been slacking!! Your story into the development of Cloud and Sephiroth as Sub/Dom is amazing. I was always astounded at the natural submission that Cloud had...of course when you're faced with death or slavery...self preservation kicks in. Sinfully delightful and wickedly delicious at the same time. Do keep this style up!!