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for A perfect bottom

by NarrisaGrant

schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh, man, I am sitting on either something cold, hot, and spiky...waiting for your next chapter! Please say its soon or something...this is honestly hot...and yah *grins* I got a mention! I was so happy to see another chappy entered and boy was it worth it. Pain and love, love and pain, they are perfectly suited to be given by Sephiroth. Oh yeah!!! But, seriously, you have away of making a slap in the face sexy.....oh my!!!! All I can say is, Give it to him good Seph! Wonderful update, and can't wait for the next. I adore this and you for writing it, or maybe my sick kinks adore it as well, we'll say its all three!
Laters,
-Lys :D
person UTShadow
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really do enjoy your stories and so I often reread them. You handle the interplay between these two characters wonderfully and I always wait with anticipation for the next chapter or story. I only wish I could write better myself but since I can't I read those who can. Keep up the wonderful work.
person Cindyip
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, the relationship is changing:)
person Cindyip
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Cloud is breaking down, yet I am so happy to watch it unfold:)
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OH dear LORD. Please tell me there is more....This was hot, enticing, sexy and dark. I could not agree more with you that Sephiroth is the ultimate top. He is wickedly sexy and his commanding presence is something no one can deny. This was a story I stumbled upon but I am so, desperately eager for more that even I would beg for pain to get it. Please update sooooooooon!

-Lys :D
person Cindyip
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
More, just more. It is more wonderful:)
person Cindyip
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want more, please please chapter 2 soon?
schedule September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay...so chapter two...*blows kiss*!!! Sinfully delightful!!! This was and is my favorite because the bond between dom and sub...just wonderful! You worked this beautifully!!
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yaaay, its back! (the story i mean) and so ami i, lol
person UTShadow
schedule September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I see you made it to AdultFanFiction.net and I can't wait to see more of your stories here. You already know that I really enjoy your writing about bdsm and it has opened me up to a whole new world of turn-on. You know how to develop your characters and make them more personable and believable. Keep up the good work.