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for I Did It for You

by ZiggyPasta

schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! That last line just made me all happy and teary! :-) So romantic and sweet! I loved it! :-)
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schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have completely turned into a pile of mush ready to sing Celine Dion's 'Because you loved me'. You made me go "AWWWWWW" through the whole fic. It's cute, it's adorable, it's... well, the part about the retching was not all that great to read (I was eating), but who cares, it's perfect. *hearts*
You have a nice and understandable sense of writing. I compliment you on that. Please keep writing these kind of little fluff stories (even if that means having Zack kiss the toiletbowl more often XD).