rate_review Reviews

Love it! Love it! LOVE IT! What a piece of yummy candy on each chapter! I absolutely adore submissive!Cloud and especially hotter when Seph is his Dom. YUMMEH! Thanks so much for this treat! Looking forward to reading more from you. :D

Oh gods this was... WOW. I am adding this link to my faves and recommended reading list. NOW. Damn this was so deliciously good I haven't the words for it. lovely lovely lovely!

Daw, goodbye story. Cute ending to everything, it was good to see Cloud so confident and happy. I hope you write another story with the two of them in the future!

I absolutely love this story. It's hard sometimes to find really great BDSM fics out there, but you've managed to produce one that surpasses all expectations. You did an excellent job researching things, and it really shows in your writing. I hope you keep up the great writing in the future!

Boo hoo hoo, I suppose all good things must come to an end. I really hope you continue to write Seph Cloud stuff, it enflames my neithers.

As for this chapter, I liked the bunny gift from Zack... I wonder if it's also a comment on the fact that Zack couldn't please Cloud, who is as horny as a bunny :D And Seph accepting Cloud's application at long last, I loved the little rabbit analogies at the end, it was really really sweet.

Looking forward to the bonus chapter! I hope it's a glimpse into their future as permanent dom and sub! Cloud's dreemz come tr00!

Very nice. I like Genesis, I think he suits the role of a friendly voyeur. Looking forward to when Cloud can take off his little cock cage, that has to be getting old for him.

OUCH, a genital piercing! I guess Cloud was into it though. What exactly does it look like, I have a hard time picturing it exactly?

Haha and I love the pink fantasy. I really appreciate how you justify everything that Cloud wants and give it so much dignity, instead of just keeping it as 'he's a faggot and he just wants to flit around in pink and have Seph fuck him like a biiitchhhh'. Cloud's not weak, he's just a human being with desires, and he knows himself very well. It really separates this fic from some other ones that attempt BDSM but don't understand the real motivations behind wanting such a thing. Obviously it's fantasy and not a manual as your disclaimer states, but I think you really do have a good idea of what you're talking about.

And Sephiroth is such a beast. I wonder how things will be when they finally fall in love love love (if they're not already of course). I don't think I've noticed Sephiroth kiss Cloud on the lips, yet... I wonder if he ever will. MOAR SOON!

I'm like a baby bird with my mouth hanging open. I WANT MORE!

Oh, the gratification! I am free now! I am infinite! I see everything in the universe all at once! UUUARRRG!

Phew. Okay, I won't beg for more too quickly. But I really hope you do continue to update this, or any of your stories soon! Thank you! <3

Cloud....you have excellent taste in jewelry:)