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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! I found your story ^^. Oh Gosh just one chapter and I'm already fearing what will happen to Cloud ><
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey girl Brittany Land AKA:Rasha Uchiha now, your story is full of fun and I just wanted to tell you that it is helping me with my story which is a work in progress, I just love Zack and the other two advent angels and how pervy the three can be at times. Keep up the good work my friend. I would also like for you to check out my profile and my two stories.
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my goodness, how I love this story! It was so captivating I literally went through all 25 chapters in one shot (much to the neglect of the paper I'm supposed to be writing...^^')! My favorite types of fanfiction are the ones that allow the reader to feel, and it's so incredibly obvious you put a lot of emotion into this. It's funny, touching, saddening--so many more emotions all at once. Everything about it is wonderful, from the characterizations to the scenarios. Keep up the great work, and Imma go stalk you on dA and ff .net now! It's always great to find another superb author!
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January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay this was like winning the fanfiction lottery : I came back and there were TWO chapters to read at once! Nnng!
Well, all I can say is that I saw it coming. Seph got hurt pretty bad, I figured there would come a time when Cloud got hurt, too. I was hoping it'd be physical and not just mental hurt, because Seph had to put up with a pretty bad injury, too. It just sucks that Cloud won't be able to walk... but without the distraction of travel, maybe they'll finally spill their guts about their feeeeelinnnngs! Besides, what are wings for? Maybe he'll be able to fly, if Seph will catch him on the landings :D
The sleepy babble at the very end was super cute. I was hoping Cloud would accidentally slip out a 'I need your big hard cock inside me', but what he said was pretty cute anyways. NEED MOAR PLZ!
Well, all I can say is that I saw it coming. Seph got hurt pretty bad, I figured there would come a time when Cloud got hurt, too. I was hoping it'd be physical and not just mental hurt, because Seph had to put up with a pretty bad injury, too. It just sucks that Cloud won't be able to walk... but without the distraction of travel, maybe they'll finally spill their guts about their feeeeelinnnngs! Besides, what are wings for? Maybe he'll be able to fly, if Seph will catch him on the landings :D
The sleepy babble at the very end was super cute. I was hoping Cloud would accidentally slip out a 'I need your big hard cock inside me', but what he said was pretty cute anyways. NEED MOAR PLZ!
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January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel special! Authors don't usually reply to my comments. :D
ANYWAY. Yes, you're very right. You're building this up very nicely. I am, by nature, an impatient creature. It makes me insane sometimes. Hah!
Oh my heart broke, just thinking of poor Cloud falling from the sky, and Sephiroth leaping valiantly to catch him. I had this image of Sephiroth curled up next to Cloud, stroking his hair and whatnot. Poor boys. Gosh.
It was creepy, suspenseful, playful, cute, and holy shit all in one chapter. I love it. Yes, holy shit is now an adjective, in case you were wondering...
Anyway, can't wait for more! If you get real ambitious, you could write DURING class and pretend you're taking notes! Haha.
ANYWAY. Yes, you're very right. You're building this up very nicely. I am, by nature, an impatient creature. It makes me insane sometimes. Hah!
Oh my heart broke, just thinking of poor Cloud falling from the sky, and Sephiroth leaping valiantly to catch him. I had this image of Sephiroth curled up next to Cloud, stroking his hair and whatnot. Poor boys. Gosh.
It was creepy, suspenseful, playful, cute, and holy shit all in one chapter. I love it. Yes, holy shit is now an adjective, in case you were wondering...
Anyway, can't wait for more! If you get real ambitious, you could write DURING class and pretend you're taking notes! Haha.
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January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
more more more when is the next chapter?
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I need to see some love soon, or I might die. Seriously. haha
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know why anyone isn't commenting on it here, it's pretty disgraceful if you ask me. But you probably already know, people on this site tend to be quiet (they're too busy fapping to type).
Well I must say, this is the SECOND time Seph has "give Cloud air" i.e. stealing kisses. If Cloud doesn't catch on to something, I'm declaring him mentally retarded. He'll get a better parking spot for Fenrir, which was in PIECES. Is it odd that I was FAR more heartbroken by the fact that his bike was torn up rather than the icky apparitions?
So on to the next! Can't wait to read moar, I'm already impatient. And you're right on the money : I LOVE the way you drag things out, it's oh so delightful to read. It's like making good chili, is it not? MUST SIMMER!
Well I must say, this is the SECOND time Seph has "give Cloud air" i.e. stealing kisses. If Cloud doesn't catch on to something, I'm declaring him mentally retarded. He'll get a better parking spot for Fenrir, which was in PIECES. Is it odd that I was FAR more heartbroken by the fact that his bike was torn up rather than the icky apparitions?
So on to the next! Can't wait to read moar, I'm already impatient. And you're right on the money : I LOVE the way you drag things out, it's oh so delightful to read. It's like making good chili, is it not? MUST SIMMER!
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January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hurray for fast updating! Man, I thought I was going to poop my pants when Cloud said 'I'm YOUR CLOUD' THAT IS SO CUTE. And Sephiroth definitely agrees, I can't wait to jump back into his brain to see what he thinks of all that's happened... because Cloud is being pretty damn obvious that he's having feelings for Seph. But at the end, Seph was being obvious right back...
NEEDS MOAR PENIS. No no, please, go at your own pace, I love the tension and build up.
NEEDS MOAR PENIS. No no, please, go at your own pace, I love the tension and build up.