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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"...I miss writing the hot lemons..." LOL XD I'm sure it'll pick up after some time. Then you can write all the lemons one writer could write O.O
I'm still with ya D: It's probably because many people don't know that you are writing a sequel hence the view counts, but I'm sure that more people will come to read after it is 10 chapters in or so :D
I'm still with ya D: It's probably because many people don't know that you are writing a sequel hence the view counts, but I'm sure that more people will come to read after it is 10 chapters in or so :D
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April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Of course we're still with you!
I'm always eagerly awaiting the next chapters in your stories! <3
I'm always eagerly awaiting the next chapters in your stories! <3
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April 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I also miss all the lemmon
Hope Siefer will show up soon...
Hope Siefer will show up soon...
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Been a fan since Cops Can't be Trusted.. you are one wicked writing goddess!! Don't ever think about making this saga shorter or more compact because I just love the realistic emotion, graphic detailing and story telling.. Look forward for the next entry! Good luck! ;)
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February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, wtf this story has already like 900 hits yet little to no reviews?!! AFF-people really do suck at reviewing... Not that I'm much better...
I still loving this! I thought at first that the lack of smut might become boring or tiresome but you prove me wrong, I still get giddy whenever
I see a new chapter has arrived. Raijin is such a sweet guy!
Squall's behavior feels very realistic, if it really is I have no idea but your writing is making it easy for the reader to put themselves in his
position. A lot of other authors would most likely have avoided his emotional trauma and just let it blow over almost immediately(Probably because
mental issues are very hard to write I guess but I'm just speculating); I'm glad you're going through with this in a mature manner and shows the
severity that is the aftertaste of rape and abuse.
Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
I still loving this! I thought at first that the lack of smut might become boring or tiresome but you prove me wrong, I still get giddy whenever
I see a new chapter has arrived. Raijin is such a sweet guy!
Squall's behavior feels very realistic, if it really is I have no idea but your writing is making it easy for the reader to put themselves in his
position. A lot of other authors would most likely have avoided his emotional trauma and just let it blow over almost immediately(Probably because
mental issues are very hard to write I guess but I'm just speculating); I'm glad you're going through with this in a mature manner and shows the
severity that is the aftertaste of rape and abuse.
Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving it!!!!! Figured there wouldnt be much smut but the story's still just soooooooooooooo good lol
Thank you tons!
Thank you tons!
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January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What happens next?! Please say you didn't fall off the face of the earth! I would die! What do Raijin and Squall do?! I need more!! When's Seifer come back into the picture?! I want more!!
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'mhappy I checked to see if the sequel started. The description is nice and I like the whole thing. I love how Quistis sounds, I think she's in character and Seifer's obsession and love for Squall is as it in the game, though you;ve made hims marter. I like Teo and want to see what will happen with him and Squall. I'm going to read the next chapter right now. Nice job.
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey, this chapter is better than the previous one, I liked the dialogue, poor Squall, he should go back to Seifer who's like always obsessed with him and totally gay for him as we all know, though knowing Squall he won't be easy to do so. I like his fragile side showing, and Raijin is fun and all. I'll be surprised if he's not best buddies with Seifer but I'll have to wait and see. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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January 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMGOMG!!! >W< Excuse my fangirl moment but... It's finally here!! 8D
I love it so far and can't wait to see what will happen further into the story ^^ I'm especially interested in seeing how Squall and Seifer will reunite! It was a pleasant surprise with the addition of Raijin in the plot. He just isn't in enough fanfics :P I really enjoyed your characterization of him; he gives a pretty nice contrast to the rest of the cast! At least that was my first impression of him but I have yet to see what will happen I guess.
I really liked how Squall and Raijin interacted in this chapter and so far I think you've managed to capture Squall's inner traumatic state really well.
Keep up the amazing work and update soon please!~ ^^
I love it so far and can't wait to see what will happen further into the story ^^ I'm especially interested in seeing how Squall and Seifer will reunite! It was a pleasant surprise with the addition of Raijin in the plot. He just isn't in enough fanfics :P I really enjoyed your characterization of him; he gives a pretty nice contrast to the rest of the cast! At least that was my first impression of him but I have yet to see what will happen I guess.
I really liked how Squall and Raijin interacted in this chapter and so far I think you've managed to capture Squall's inner traumatic state really well.
Keep up the amazing work and update soon please!~ ^^