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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! I'm so happy you're continuing on with this fic, it's such a compelling story! I agree with Calder, Squall and Seifer are so stupid about their feelings... Looking forward to Squall's reaction when he wakes up to Seifer in bed with him!
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November 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay- so I NEVER review. Ever. But I really love this story, and am on the edge of my seat wanting to find out what happens, lol. I love the characterization in this, it's really spot on. Don't know what else to say, beyond I really hope you find the time to finish. Just great stuff =)
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that your portrayal of Seifer is amazing. I love it. I like how you gave life to Rinoa as well, she acts in a manner that's very real compared to how many portray her. I like that you avoided bashing her and made her very human by her actions, it was refreshing. I can't wait for more! Especially with Squall waking up next chapter.
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May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Of course we are still reading \o/ I love your style. It's so much fun to see how you two develop this story and how it has characteristics of both of you. This 15th chapter was very good and I thought it flowed really well. It was very touching to see Seifer taking care of Squall. And I liked Seifer's dialogue with Calder, I like their relationship. So Calder knows more now... I'm glad he was able to end this chapter alive with all the questions he asked xD
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May 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'm a new reader and I just read all 15 chapters and I gotta say, this is great! I'm excited about this story, I love the characters you invented and the development of squall and Seifer's relationship. Just so well done! Keep it up, I can't hardly wait for the next chapter! :)
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May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Omg yay an update~! Can't wait for Squall and Seifer to talk again ><
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April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love how you've portrayed Squall. While his actions seem unbelievable, it is completely believable at the same time. Though Seifer is perhaps my favorite part of this. The fierce loyalty he still has is one of my favorite characteristics. Wonderful job, I'm excited for the next update.
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March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was surprised to know about Squall's state. I thought he'd be fine xD It's nice to know that Seifer will take care of him. I wonder how that will be. I think it'll be difficult for both of them in the beginning.
I can't see any flaw in the story. It's one of those fics I don't have anything to say for it to get better. The characters' reactions and emotions are very well descripted. I hope you two have time to write more and keep bringing this good work.
I can't see any flaw in the story. It's one of those fics I don't have anything to say for it to get better. The characters' reactions and emotions are very well descripted. I hope you two have time to write more and keep bringing this good work.
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February 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad there was an update :)
Still love the story. I still can't wait to see how it pans out with these two. The last chapter was rather sad, with the severing of their bond, but as always it was so well written. I can't wait to see what happens next :3
Still love the story. I still can't wait to see how it pans out with these two. The last chapter was rather sad, with the severing of their bond, but as always it was so well written. I can't wait to see what happens next :3
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January 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ughhhh I keep checking back for your updates, so happy to see a new chapter. Can't wait for Seifer to be reunited with Squall ><