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May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, as always! Every action and emotion was so believable. I really liked the part when Squall’s built up anger ended up in that punch, that must have hurt a lot, but I think that Seifer’s a lot more hurt seeing Squall leaving. I hope you have time to do everything you need and to write, of course! And thank you for the doujinshi! You’re really kind!
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
what can i say, i've read all the chapters countless time.. this story is gripping - very realistic and full of emotion.. don't know how you guys do it but the storyline and narration is addictive.. whatever you guys do, no matter how busy you guys are at the moment, please don't give up on this story.. big big fan over here ;)
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May 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww so sad ;-; They always have to make things so damn hard on themselves xD But wonderfully written, as always. I can't wait for the next update even if you'll be busy. :3
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can’t really do anything here but praise your work on this story. I can only see positive points in the text. I liked the description of the aftereffects of the drug and the descriptions in general were really well-done (something very characteristical of your work). Oh the "It had been amazing" part was really funny, and I really laughed along with Hyne and his buddies when Seifer remembered when he came.Waiting for the next chapter!
P.S.The scanned doujinshis seem really tempting.
P.S.The scanned doujinshis seem really tempting.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
But it's so true! X3 You're very welcome. This is my hands down favorite fic on here, & so well written. I love it.
Loved the last chapter too. I always try & somewhat like Rinoa...but since she always seems to somehow get in the way of Squall & Seifer I just can't help but despise her xD Always in the way of the two getting together. I guess the angst is worth it though X3 I can't wait to see how Squall responds to all of this, & what Seifer does :]
Loved the last chapter too. I always try & somewhat like Rinoa...but since she always seems to somehow get in the way of Squall & Seifer I just can't help but despise her xD Always in the way of the two getting together. I guess the angst is worth it though X3 I can't wait to see how Squall responds to all of this, & what Seifer does :]
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April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! ugh the best sex scene i've ever read between the two hands down. EVER! so amazing. those two are so hot on the drug xD It's amazing how lax Squall was compared to usual. Me & my boyfriend read it & loved it. Props to you guys on this chapter [& on the entire thing] :3 Can't wait for the next chapter!! <3
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March 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I’m very pleased with the effects of Avalanche on them! It was hot and meaningful. It’s good to see Squall letting go of his restraints and Seifer having the opportunity to fulfill his desire. I’m happy they had fun before the angst to come... Which makes me feel sorry for them being sad, though I love to see them suffer... Well, I hope they have more sex to compensate for it later!
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March 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was incredible!!! Amazingly hot and... damn, my brain has turned into happy gooey mush! Gah, you two have mad skills... and I need a cigarette. lol. Thanks for writing and sharing!
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March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Squall's losing it. He just took a drug that he knows nothing about. XD This is excellent so far!
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March 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I only had time to read it today and... It’s wonderful, as always! The story is flowing very well, and it’s so easy to keep reading. I’m really excited now that Seifer and Squall are together in the apartment, I wonder what will happen between them, I hope the drug helps! I think Seifer was dressed in a really sexy way. It’s very cool to imagine he’s always fantasized about Squall and his belts.
I’ll be waiting for the next chapter!
I’ll be waiting for the next chapter!