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for Into Esthar

by Chemotaxis

person william
schedule March 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
XD Aww Squally. He's so cute. Trying to match Seifer & take the drugs. It'll be interesting to see what happens. I have a few guesses but I don't know if any of them will be right. At first I just thought the drugs were like ecstasy, but I could be wrong. Watch them be an aphrodisiac xD
I'm excited to see what happens next! Lovely & wonderfully written, as always.
person william
schedule February 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE the story so far!!! I can't wait for the next chapter :3
& Rinoa...bleh. Though I did somewhat enjoy her & Squall's part, more than other fics that involve her. it was craftily done :3
person Vovo
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God, you write amazingly. Your descriptions are very very good. Ahahhahahahhahah, I loved the look of indifference Squall gave Rinoa when she asked if he had given the dog the tuna thing. I think your Squall is very in-character, I like that. You two, keep going!
person Aerawyn
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to be the first to review! ^_^

To the readers: I've had the honor of editing this story for Chem and Wolkje, and I can hardly stand the time in between chapters when I can't wait for the next one. They're both fantastic writers, this story is going to be amazing, and I encourage everyone to read it! Their characterizations of Squall and Seifer are fresh and believable, the storyline isn't cliche and boring like so many I've read, and their storytelling is just so enticing. I'll stop there; the writing really speaks for itself.

Ladies, it's a pleasure, and I look forward to working with and for you in the future!