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for Paine's Dilemma

by ClimaxJump

schedule August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is still fun to read. I check almost every day to see if this had been updated.

Are you planning to finish this? I really hope so.
schedule July 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fic. I hope there's more to come.

Although, in all honesty, I also hope you break up the bigger blocks of text a bit to make things a little easier on the eyes.
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was hot stuff. Still hoping for the next chapter. I want to see Yuna get pounded into submission. Please.
SailorNemesis
schedule March 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Chap 3 was fun, I wish they could have fooled around a bit longer. Looking forward to Paine x Yuna.
SailorNemesis
schedule March 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see another chap. Mostly good, but CONDOMS ARE NOT SEXY! It's a fantasy for Pete's sake. Stop doing that. At least with Rikku and Yuna. I WANT Yunnie knocked up.
SailorNemesis
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such a cool second chapter!!!
schedule February 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fun smut. Hope to see more. I'd like Paine to lose control and rape Yuna in the shower in a future chap.
Keep writing,
SailorNemesis
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
That was soooooo Cool!!! Finally another futa writer! I thought I was one of the only ones. And not only that you gave it to Paine, who is just a futa from beginning to end.

And the way you did Rikku is awesome. Shes a slut, but even she can make being slutty look cute and fun. So good and please continue!!!