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Sorry no mail site at the moment, BUT!!! I THINKS me LIKES this Sphiroth. Gives ya the F****** shivers like all S***** Hell. BUT ITS WORTH IT. I mean, I can so see Seph pulling a stunt like this to f*** with little innocent clouds mind. Ann, cloud deserves it, NO ONE takes our Sephiroth away, and doesn't get haunted by him. (Or pwned, or owned or has papers signed and delivered saying... YOU GOT SERVED!!! Tee hee, or maybe I've just had too much sugar and I'm on a sugar high. What do you think Sephiroth, and pwese be nice about your answer, pwese?) Hey wait!!! Sephiroth forget what I said in the start of my comment my mail site is in. And I also changed my mind on your answer, BE AS BAD AS U WANT!!! But I'll tell u one thing, hee hee, I'll laugh my a** off. Don't ya just love being able to get into these things so much bye!!!
P.S.
Poor, poor *pitiful* cloud...

Seph honey, I HATE, HATE to say it. BUT THE PAPERS ARE SIGNED, HAVE BEEN DELIVERED, AND THEY SAY... ... ... *YOU GOT SERVED*!!
Meowch!!!

Holy crap.
I freaking love your insane!Cloud and this story is amazing. I've never read a time travel fic where he's like this and you're writing him perfectly.
I really hope you update soon!

I really liked this story, your crazy Cloud had me laughing my behind off. Please update soon, I want to know what happens when they find the reactor gone.

I'm glad to see how twisted cloud is in this still :D a problem with a lot of time travel fics is clouds seemingly magical ability to heal, recover, and forgive as soon as he's in the past. I understand sepihroth not being crazy and evil in the past, (I also understand him being a twat in the past too) but cloud spent, what, seven years or something awful fighting this guy as the evil Final Boss villain, that's more than enough to smother any civility or, god forbid, affection cloud has. No, if anyone had to spend that long killing a guy three times over, their first thought when in the past would be 'how can I kill him early?' or something. Anyway, you obviously don't have this problem, so I'm not gonna rant to you about it any more. I really like how this is going so far, love the z/c interaction :D

Your loyal fan,
MF

Haha! The ending of this chapter just slayed me. I love it. The mental imagery of Zack stuffing a whole muffin into his mouth (and then being throttled by Tifa) was just hilarious. <3

Love it! I'm so glad he got Vincent out ^__^

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Wooooooooow~ I had no idea this story was going to take this sort of turn, but I'm so happy~ a unique time travel story in addition to the messed up cloud theme, its like my two biggest favorites when it comes to this fandom~ now I REALLY REALLY can't wait for more!!!!

Loving it more each chapter
MF

This story is a real good story I enjoyed it.I love the Zombie bunnies and Zombie Zack.Some one should really make a Resident Evil FF7 cross over. Wesker and Sephiroth teaming up and cloud and his group and Chris and his group putting them in their place. I just got the idea when Zombie bunnies and Zombie Zack showed up;)