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for Storm Cloud Smiles

by Hnoss

person mangofox
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh... oh my.... this just keeps getting more and more twisted. I thought it was a shock finding out rhys was a ghost, now I'm just waiting for the next chapter to figure out what's going on! I love it.

Can't wait~
MF
person Iyasu
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I've never read anything like this before and it directly appeals to my little twisted heart. I want more!
person mangofox
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, evil bunnies, huh....? Kinda goofy, it kept the nightmare scene from getting to serious. Even when sephiroth was strangling cloud, my mind was still back with the bunnies... When I first read the whole 'nsuddenly sephiroth was dancing around with a pink bunny' thing, I had to stop and do a double take. Aside from that, nice chapter.

I dunno about you, but if I were to receive a charm that keeps my worst fears away, I would damn well hope its waterproof because that thing would never come off.

Impatient for more~
MF

person xXkissofdeath89Xx
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be a rewrite of your story Beyond, isn't it? I only got to read the first few chapters, but I sounds like the same story, just with a different title. Not that I mind. I can't find Beyond anymore, so I'm looking forward to the chance to finish it.I really liked what I had read.
person mangofox
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I like this so far~ the whole tormented cloud cliche is my guilty pleasure... looking forward to more~
person mangofox
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, how curious~ the moon spirit, like gaia, how neat. I've never read a story that explored any supernatural forces beyong gaia and the life stream and maybe the "goddess" for loveless, but thatsusually just gaia. I like it, its rare to see such a nice original idea in the ff7 fandom.

Hope you update soon~
MF
person Ren
schedule March 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm always a fan of more Cloud-torture...^^ and zombies always make things better. They're like bacon. Except gory-er.
I enjoyed reading, hope to hear more from you soon.

Ren
person Tripliss
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love the idea! Can't wait to see more!