AFF Fiction Portal
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful!

I hope you plan to continue this!
*puppy eyes*
person Selim
schedule June 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mah, felt bad for reading all this and not reviewing yet...

I'm enjoying it, mostly because I always felt FF4 needed a twist. I remember playing it back when it was Final Fantasy II (hooboy, I think I'm getting old...) and playing it on my SNES. Used to switch between Cecil and Kain and had Rydia as their kid....

...ANYWAY...

I'm enjoying this. Hope to see more Kain x Cecil of course but beggars can't be chosers.

Onward to finding Yang at the bar!
schedule June 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I do look forward to reading more of this as you get it up Chibi. XD I will admit I do like the handling of becoming a paladin and releasing the dark knight. So far, the pacing and description is well done; it matches the pacing of the game narrative rather well. Still, Cecil doesn't have it easy at all. I wonder how that will work out.
person Sage
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I just played the game on gameboy advanced, so I can follow all of the events with no trouble. Please continue, your narration is superb and the detail is very vivid. I look forward to how Dark Kain addresses Cecil.
schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing so far =) I like how you've set up their relationship to eachother and given us a good taste of their characters.


I also love Cecil's wetdream XD It made me giggle, but in a good way.