rate_review Reviews

Great job! Your fic is so awesome I only created an account in AFF to review it and tell you I love the fact you're taking your time to develop the characters and the plot, instead of throwing it all together hastily. Please continue.

This is an excellent story so far -- I could hardly stop reading it. It's one of the most unique ones I've ever read, with so many different ideas and sub-plots, the various budding relationships and how they develop over time.

That being said, I do have a request - please, please find a good beta reader! It's interesting to see how you've improved even from one chapter to the next, but you still have a lot of spelling and grammar errors, and mis-used words (like 'your' instead of 'you're' or 'u' instead of 'you', for example), especially in the earlier chapters. If you could find someone to go over the whole thing with a fine-toothed comb, then this story would be more than awesome - it'd be damn near perfect.

Please note, it's not a complaint -- if it bothered me that much, I wouldn't have read through the whole thing and still want more. If anything, it says something about your storytelling ability that I kept reading, even with errors that normally would have me leaving after the first chapter.

Omigosh! I'm sooooo relieved that you are doing better and even have a job! ^^
Congrats to chu! <3 Please continue to get better kay?
Now for fangirl moment.
I'm so excited to have read these chapters. Makes little sense I know, but I'm just that damned giddy lol.
A peek of Chaos a dash of Reno and Tseng...*happy fangirl* But I was sad when Tseng cut his hair. *sorrow*
Claude got what he deserved and then some since Tseng still seemed to have let him lived.
Zack and Cloud...Oh I love those two. ^^ The way they interact with one another is awesome and so natural. *nods*
It fits nicely. Sooo cannot wait for the next update and please take good care of yourself til then!

~yahoo
Kyuubi-chan a.k.a Xiana Tsuya

peaz write more

I'm so happy your feeling better and back to updating. It may feel like a while since you've updated but I know one thing, you haven't lost you touch.
The new chapters are great! Can't wait for what's next.
Thanks for such an awsome fix.

No!!!! Tseng can't die. Anyway now that I got that out of my system. Beautiful chapter. I especially love the tender moment between Tseng and Reno. I can't wait for more.

So I'm probably going to be super creepy and just constantly leave you reviews now, but you posted a new chapter, sooo... I thought I'd leave another review. Because I really do like this story a LOT.

Continual excellence in plot and character development. I live the way you write overall, and spelling/grammatical errors are so rare and inconsequential that they really don't matter.

Also, if Tseng dies, I will also ACTUALLY die. I know that sounds over-dramatic, but it's not. I will actually die. ... Okay, so maybe it's being a touch over-dramatic, but SRSLY. Guise. Guise, srsly. ... Guise...

Im not going to lie, it made me sad to read about Cloud and Zack. I think Seph needs and wants him more than he is willing to admit. :( But still, it's really good thus far!

I have literally never read a story that was 20+ chapters before. I ALWAYS lose interest in a massive way and just stop reading. This is the first story where I read every chapter, then gotten ti the end of what had been written and completely freaked out. "WHAT AM I SUPPOSED TO DO WITH MY SPARE TIME NOW?! NOW I ACTUALLY HAVE TO USE IT TO BE PRODUCTIVE. DAMMIT."

Seriously.

This is awesome.

I hope your health takes a turn for the better as well! I mean, you don't know me, but it still really sucks to be continually sick. You have the well wishings of a stranger being sent to you!

Welcome back. Great chapter.