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for Walking Out on Destiny

by HarliqueenNight

person X.T
schedule March 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ooooh an update! I'm like so uber happy right now!
First and foremost. I hope you are doing much better from the last time you posted. I'm sorry you were sick for so long.
Welcome back and thank you for posting.
I loved this chapted because of the interaction with Tseng and Sephiroth as well as Vincent and Hojo...That's still friggen
weird to say no matter how long I've been reading this story lol. But yes. I have never actually seen anything with Cloud
with Rosso and I must say seeing them both hyped up on caffine made me laugh so hard! XD
Please keep up the good work and I cannot wait for the next installment.

~Xiana Tsuya...seems I forgot my password again >>
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great chapter.
person Liera
schedule November 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
First and foremost...I really do hope you get well soon! -sends you get well vibes- Should send you some chicken noodle soup too not unless you don't like that...But yes! Wishing you the best and hope you feel better soon! ^_^
Now that my computer is back up and running I can review again yay!
Read the omake which was sooooo awesome and you've now made me want to play that game because of that lol.
And as always Zack amuses me so much! I love him so. Damn Veld for being the traitor!
Tseng should really do something terrible to him...just can't think of anything to suggest...
Aww Vincent for not remembering Seph. *prts him* Can't wait for the next chapter and please take care!

~Feel better soon!
Liera Antionette
schedule October 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great chapter.
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you're feeling better, being sick suck so much. xP Anyhow, I can't wait for the next update, though if you're not feeling up to it don't rush yourself; I'm sure us readers will still patiently wait for the updates. :3 Get well soon and stay well. ~Lamica ♥
schedule October 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this story is getting very interesting. update soon.
person kanazerosukenaru
schedule September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
review for chapter one
being a recent fan to the final fantasy fandom, i have not been spoiled by "shipping" one pair or another and i'm excited to see how this fiction is going to work itself out.

i love the idea of vince being seph's guardian, and loved the way you took your time developing their relationship in this chapter.

looking forward to more...on to chapter two
schedule September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait. :3 Hope you feel better soon, I've been sick myself and it sucks. xP Will be highly anticipating the next chapter of this. ♥
person DTE
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
23 and a half! Lol! Zack would have been offended to hear that he only counts as half a lay.
That conversation between Seph and his mom was both funny and disturbing! No one wants to have the talk!

Another great chapter. Please update soon.
person ice
schedule September 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So...when you say Cloud and experimentation...do you mean sexual...or like crazy scientist experimentation? Because I totally vote for sexual! :D Keeup up the awesome work. I hope you feeeeel better. :D