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for Walking Out on Destiny

by HarliqueenNight

person DTE
schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwww! Such brotherly love! It was so adorable. Shame though that it took Tseng being tortured for Sephiroth to come back to his senses. Veld! That traitor! How could he?! Why?! I hope Tseng manages to break free and exact revenge.
As always, another great chapter from you. I can't wait to read more.
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm always looking forward to an update of this fic, so a little more to read would be more than welcomed. I'm all for more. ;D ♥ Keep 'em coming please? :3
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh! I loved the first meeting between Zack and Cloud. It was so wonderfully funny. As for those collars. That's is cruel!!!! If only you could see my tears n_n but people could be cruel like that. Lovely job on this chapter. As for the longer chapters or staying the same. It doesn't matter which you choose. I'll still read them anyway LOL.
person ice
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm always down for longer! I like the cloud/zach interplay. It's really cute. :D
person DTE
schedule August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally it's Rufus's turn to take over, awesome!

But where does that leave Lazard?

And what will Tseng do? The collars are kinky, true, but obviously meant for more nefarious reasons.

It is now fact that your are the best author in AFF, and I will always look forward to reading your story before everyone else's.

Can't wait for more.
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
putting my two-cents here too..
This was great... love the flaming Gen-Gen here dragging Cloud along with him... as well as the moments with Tseng and Vinny. gah!
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hurray my compy is back up so I can review and stop reading it on my phone! LOL
Hurray for crazy Hojo and his skills as a scientist. Totally rocks for that.
And poor Sephy....seems like he lost it as soon as Vincent "passed" and just allowed
himself to fall deeper into the Jenova insanity.
Genesis and Cloud amuse the hell out of me together just as Cloud and his mother does.
^^ And Tseng is out for blood huzzah! Hurry up and off the crazy woman. Better yet,
have Vincent do it. mufufufu. Excuse the jumping around I'm sleepy rofl.
A puppy Vincent is a nice thought though...
Anway!
Oh noooooeees! Jenova trying to sic Sephy on his adopted brother! Baaaad Jenova!
Oh hell I should leave it at wonderful story as always and I'm so glad you are keeping it moving.
<3 I also like the kingdom hearts one you are doing as well. Thanks as always for the
awesome story and ah...excuse the previous post of an overworked and very exhausted fan girl lol.

~Woo Hoo!
Xiana Tsuya

p.s Vincey know who Tseng is! Vincey knows who Tseng is! /singing and hoping for those two/
and an amusing thought? The password post key thing that allows you to post your reviews?
It's Vincent valentine lmao!
person DTE
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally Tseng finds Vincent...but he's not in such great shape though. At least he's alive.

I love Genesis here. He's so much fun and amusing.

Jenova is starting to make her move, but I always found her benign compared to lucrezia.

I love your story so much and it's always the first one I check to see for updates. You're an amazing writer and each chapter is so riveting.

Please update soon again.
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
o: I absolutely adore this fic! <3
I've always been interested in people's perspective's on Sephiroth's childhood and it's awesome to find an AU one!
I have been reading this since it started and unfortunately, this is the first chance I have had to review it.

It's amazing and I really, really can't wait for the next update! <3
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more. :} Absolutely enjoying the story so far. ♥