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Genesis's reaction to Cloud was adorable, but then so is Cloud when he was still little.

Yay! Vincent is starting to come back to the land of the living, I hope he does come back with Chaos. Ever since I've played Dirge of Cerberus I've found Chaos to be actually a cute demon (weird, I know).

Another awesome chapter from you, I've enjoyed reading it very much. Hope you update soon.

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Not vincent! Please tell me he won't stay dead!

What did Lucrezia mean? Is Vincent truly Sephiroth's father?
You know, I always had this theory that maybe Nero (from Dirge of Cerberus) might be Vincent's son. He has black hair and red eyes just like Vincent so isn't it possible?

Great chapter. Really moving and awesome despite Vincent's demise.

Oh dear! Sephiroth is starting to change, I hope he doesn't become the demon Jenova is trying to turn him into. Nibelheim! That's just asking for trouble, but cloud's there, so yay!

A great chapter as always. I can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm with Seph Tseng so shouldn't have cute his hair, but it was short in cc. *is anxiously waiting for Lucrecia to get hers* Your story inspires me to write something of my own since I really like your idea of Vince raising Seph and Tseng. Please take your time!

~Liera

Hello there! I must say this story is soooo friggen AWESOME! I haven't read such a good story in sooo long. And omg!! You made Hojo appealing...*shudders* It's strange for me to say that rofl! And I love how everyone acted when they were younger! Seph was evil as a kid in this story! But le gasp! Lucrecia as the bad guy is genius! And I've never heard Hojo's jap voice...me thinks I need to remedy this. And Vincent! oh Vincent...*cries a little* That my hurt my heart...I think I cried a little especially for Kid and Dante! Tseng is so cute in this for me...they all are. I love your writing style and I must applaud you. Seriously...me liking Hojo is a big deal lol. My boyfriend just gave me the crazy "what did you just say?" look lmao! but yes...I am a huge Vincent/Tseng fangirl...I can't help it I just am...and as an interesting couple...I'd say Genesis and Vincent...but I'm rooting for Vincent and Tseng...That boy needs a hug and some love big time. gaaaah...I can't wait til the next chapter!! I'm all excited now!!I totally hope Lucrecia gets hers for killing them...andbreaking Hojo's heart...*still can't believe she just said that* But yes please continue!
Oh and yea! Imagining Vincent speaking Mandarin...*swoons from ultra sexiness* Major cool points for that! Sorry for the long review...again just started this story tonight at...*squints* 2:03 am...yea...I'll be waiting and take care!

~Waiting Anxiously
Xiana Tsuya

p.s omg nuuuuuu Vincent's temporarily dead waaah! Y_Y Poor Tseng and Sephiroth

There's a lot I have good to say about this chapter. I'm sorry if this is too long for you. To start, that funeral scene and the little scene afterwards in Vincent's house was lovely and so heartbreaking. Great Job. Even though I knew you would eventually have to kill Turk Vincent, I still cried when he died. I can't wait to see everyone's reaction when he comes back if you are planning to have him return to them. Another thing, lovely job with Reno. You absolutely captured him beautifully. I love how you gradually are bring in the future Turks. I can't wait for more. I'm still loving this story. Thank you for updating quickly and the wonderful story. Sorry again about the large review but this chapter was packed with wonderfully written events.

Crap, I had this really long and thought out review all typed in this box and *poof* my pc bit it... stupid work computers and bad weather.... Now, to try and remember what I wrote.

The only man that can truly order me around finally appears, yo! (Reno is physical embodiment of my muse) I love how you introduced him, it's was... perfect.

Vincent, gah. Though he had to die, it still hurts but you did such a wonderful job on that and the funeral. To be honest what got me was Tseng and Seph's reactions. Poor lil ninja, I just want to hug him and feed him and tell him it'll be ok.. WE LOVE YOU TSENG!

Seriously, I cannot WAIT until you hit us with Part 2. Keep up the outstanding and entertaining work!

Oooohhhhh! The story is getting me pumped! Will Chaos be out? Oh please! Please destroy Lucrecia horribly <33333 Oh and I still vote for a Hojo/Vincent. I like Cid but his pairing with Vincent is all over so I would like Hojo and Hojo seems hot in this story *Q*

Wow. That was so heart wrenching! And so well done!

I like how you brought Cerberus in. That was touching. I'm a little apprehensive about the next chapter, cuz I'm worried that more people are guna die. Lol. Otherwise, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us!

you flatter me too much with your kind words!

OKIE this Chappy: 10 the break LOVE the Turk oath that was amazing!
Good job with it and man Lady Shinra is one kick ass woman, Roofie you better be proud of her in the future!