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for Walking Out on Destiny

by HarliqueenNight

schedule June 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah! So last episode we met Kid and by his very description I said to myself with diabolical glee: RENO! *insert fangirl squeal here* (I know you said blonde hair but I am part of the tiny base of people that likes to pick on the him, believing that the man MUST dye his hair) Glad to see that Kid really ISN'T Reno... kinda would suck with the whole being dead thing.

The darkness and gore in this chapter, superb. It wasn't too too much and in the same instance it didn't leave holes in the scene. As gory as Kid's death was, you did it tastefully(?)

So we had all that angst and drama and near tears and who comes along to have me cackle out loud?
Genesis.
God I love that LOVELESS spewing psychopath!

Then the fluff with Vincent, Seph and Tseng.
Three words to summarize this chapter:
BEST. CHAPTER. EVER!
person DTE
schedule June 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh! I seriously hope it was Lucrezia so that Vincent and Seph would finally have a reason to off her. Poor Sephiroth, he's on his own now (asides from genesis and angeal). Tseng is finally gonna become a TURK, yay! And cerberus! I always did like the gun's design from the game. And I recently found out that there really is a real life gun similair to Cerberus! It's smaller though, and reversed so that the 2 barrels are on top and one on the bottom, it was designed in the late sixties and is of poor accuracy, but very dangerous.

Loved this chapter(Always expect me to say that because I really will like them), and I hope you will update soon.
person DTE
schedule June 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Short chapter but still very good. Looks like things might take a different twist now with Lady Shinra out of the picture. I'm glad both Rufus and Lazard are mentioned, I always liked them both despite Lazard's short role in Crisis Core.

Great chapter as always. How can I not read with the story from the start to finish when it is this awesome and spellbinding?!

Loved it! Please update soon
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am ashamed to admit that I lost track of this story... I didn't keep tabs on it like I had hoped to but I caught it today and OH MY GOD. I thought it was amazing before? NOW?! It's FanFlippingTastic!

...was that a young Rude we may have met in passing there is del Sol?

lil kick ass ninja Tseng has stolen my heart... gaahhh!!!

I'm enjoying your portrayal of Hojo, I actually feel for the man here. Lucrecia, dude she needs to go die in a fire or something.

Awesome job and I promise I will keep better tabs on this story!! It's wonderful!
person DTE
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Lucrezia was a psycho evenb efore Jenova, still it was surprisingly human of Hojo to warn him, maybe now Vinny will finally let go of the wacko and move on to better things...like hot guys to take to bed. teehee. Loved the story as expected.
person DTE
schedule June 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Lol! That was so cute and I do like how Tseng is starting to grow into the Turk role he has in the game.
Ooooh, Lucrezia's starting to crumble. Good! Never liked her t all.
Awesome story. Will always look forward to the next chapter.
person Secret
schedule June 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am liking Hojo a bit in this story. My wild imagination is making me imagine Hojo/Vincent but it's not my story so I don't really care who you pair Vincent with. I like Cid too! <3

So anyway, kill Lucrecia please~ I want her killed by Chaos. *sigh* If only. But again. it's your story so ... yeah.

Keep up the great work~!
person silverblaise
schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Am loving this and can't wait for more! It's great seeing the interactions between all of them when they're younger, though I'm looking forward to the time skip too and more characters getting to come along and play. :-D Can it be Lucrecia that they lose? Please? Pretty please? I don't think anyone - characters or readers - would complain too much if she were to "accidentally" fall overboard. On one hand, I can kind of understand what she's thinking and trying to do, and on the other, she's just a psychotic b*tch. Looking forward to the next chapter!
person DTE
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
To think that the person who finally speaks out loud our views of Lucrezia would be Hojo is mindboggling!
And are both scientists planning? I loved how Sephiroth got jealous of Tseng, it was so cute!

Loved it! Can't wait for more.
person DTE
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I loved it! Finally they head off onto their vacation. Sucks that Hojo and lucrezia are going to tag along. Tseng was so cute the way you wrote him.

I'm not sure if my review for the previous chapter got through, the power went out just as I was clicking the review button.
Anyway, I liked it as well, and the idea of Vincent being the mom was funny.

Love this story to bits. Please keep updating, I can't wait for the next chapter.