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for Walking Out on Destiny

by HarliqueenNight

person DTE
schedule May 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Poor Sephiroth, being forced to fight his only friend really sucks. Hopefully things won't go wrong between him and Genesis.
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww Omg this is such a great fic! I want a little Tseng at home! Im wondering how Sephiroth and Genesis are gonna turn out... oh boy. :)
person DTE
schedule May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter!
Man, Lucrezia really was a pain was't she? Both in the game and in the story.
Loved all the characters; Lazard and Tseng were cute, Hojo a little surprising, and Genesis incorrigible.
Love it! Love it!Love it!

Please update soon.
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so loving this story. Great job with Tsung. I loved him! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! So cruel LOL but I'm quilty of making cliffhangers when I write too.
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying the story so far, hope to see more of it soon. A few grammatical errors but aside from that it's a great read. ^~^ Don't keep us in suspense for too long okay? ♥
person DTE
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hve no words...except...AWESOME! Really, best chapter so far. And Tseng's here too along with Angeal. YAY! More please. Keep up the great work.
person cewo
schedule April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I for one, am certainly enjoying your story; it's very entertaining! I admit I am trying to get my head around the ages of everyone involved as Rufus is a fetus, Tseung is 12, and the "generals" are all mid-teen-ish. I guess Cloud isn't born yet? I didn't think Sephiroth was that much older than him. However, I do realize this is all slightly AU, so you can make them whatever age you want! Thanks for being so quick with the updates! Looking forward to reading more! Oh, and I have a feeling "alcohol" is going to be on Sephiroth's "not allowed" list in future! Thanks again! (I think I've overdosed on exclamation points.....)
person DTE
schedule April 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter! You even mentioned Lazard, whom I like alot even if he is nothing more but a bunch of cells for now.

Can't wait for the next chapter, pelase update soon.
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh goddess I am enjoying this story SO much! I love AU/retellings of Seph's early years. It's sweet and funny and sexy. Keep it up! More!
person DTE
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! You write the characters so well, their personalities very nicely done. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon.