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for Black Moon

by trabeck89

person anon
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
good fanfic take your time n all but if you discontinue it i might shot you T_T
person Anon
schedule August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked the concept but I could not even begin to get into the story. The way that you have it written is disjointed and distracting. It is more like a chatroom rp rather then a story.
The continual repetition of the names also makes it difficult to have any flow in the story. This is more like an outline then a story.
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
In the words of Tucker from Red Vs Blue Bow chika wow wow! I love it, when I found read that Zack's crush was Genesis I fell over I love how it is going. I'm happy that the wolves are finding their lovers. Keep up the good work.
schedule December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! Angeal as Zack's dad oh hell yes! I love how your story is turning out keep it up:)
schedule October 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chap 5
wow! i really love this story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I'M BEGGING U TO UPDATE SOON I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
schedule September 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fuck if i know why, but i really like this story, bestiality and all!
person Kitsune3
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter! I just love your stories.
schedule April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw, this is a really beautiful fic! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more~! ^_^ I'm a sucker for everything you guys write. lol I'm a loyal reader. ^_^ Can't wait for the new chapter on Schwarz Mitternacht and the next chapter for this one. <3 <3
-Aiya Sagara