schedule
May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hot as hell! Plz continue it. I would like to read more :)
schedule
March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. You should really add another chapter to it!
schedule
February 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This....I love it! The amount of tension...and intensity! It's really, really engaging. I'd love to see a second part. (˚O˚')
At first, like other fan-fiction stories I've read, I'm not so open to reading stories I find randomly. I usually have to take chances and go through a quick skim to see if its good or not. So while I was reading the first few paragraphs, I wasn't too sure it was good or not, but once Sephiroth's dialogue started to build up with insults directed at the poor tea-server I finally came to the conclusion that this story would be definitely worth reading (and even if its kind of past my bed time).
I can work as a one-shot, but I feel as if it could use at least a second part/chapter. In fact, I'm very curious to what will happen next once Sephiroth returns to Wutai.
Speaking of tea, I kind of chuckled as I read this because I'm a regular tea drinker. Not only that, my mother was born and raised in Japan for most of her life so I've been well exposed to Japanese culture while growing up in the US. So basically, there are a couple of things I feel very familiar with as I'm reading this. It also makes sense that tea ceremonies will have a high level of diligence in terms of where everything is placed and how its done so there's a certain kind of tension going on within this sort of scenario. Add Sephiroth into this kind of thing and more tension is added. It also makes the story more interesting too.
At first, like other fan-fiction stories I've read, I'm not so open to reading stories I find randomly. I usually have to take chances and go through a quick skim to see if its good or not. So while I was reading the first few paragraphs, I wasn't too sure it was good or not, but once Sephiroth's dialogue started to build up with insults directed at the poor tea-server I finally came to the conclusion that this story would be definitely worth reading (and even if its kind of past my bed time).
I can work as a one-shot, but I feel as if it could use at least a second part/chapter. In fact, I'm very curious to what will happen next once Sephiroth returns to Wutai.
Speaking of tea, I kind of chuckled as I read this because I'm a regular tea drinker. Not only that, my mother was born and raised in Japan for most of her life so I've been well exposed to Japanese culture while growing up in the US. So basically, there are a couple of things I feel very familiar with as I'm reading this. It also makes sense that tea ceremonies will have a high level of diligence in terms of where everything is placed and how its done so there's a certain kind of tension going on within this sort of scenario. Add Sephiroth into this kind of thing and more tension is added. It also makes the story more interesting too.
schedule
October 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a fabulous read. A few corrections need to be made, and at times the syntax is a little repetitive, but overall, the intensity is quite fabulous.
schedule
September 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I recommend.....a sequel where he actally does take her. Or another chapter add-on to make it a two-shot.