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for Ninja Instincts

by Jyet

schedule October 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I particularly liked how you handled the interaction between Cloud and Yuffie in this. It felt very in-character and flowed naturally. The sex felt very brief after all of the build-up and talking about it but was still fun; the best was Yuffie's initial thoughts about how it felt in terms of fullness. Nice work on this.