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for Let Him In

by GodOfInsanity

person Anon
schedule March 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
glad you updated :)
person too lazy to sign in Sabaku
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok I laughed at how Vincent and Seph fought mentally in their own way.

Still that was always a thought; what would happen if Vincent was his father? I always thought about that.

Can't wait to read the next part.
person animekid
schedule March 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Don't drop this!

I thought it was kind of funny how Cloud threw a hissy overprotective fit against Vincent.

I am curious on the ending and how far it's going to -ahem- go.
person anon
schedule February 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
^_^ awesome
person animekid
schedule February 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh shoot I'm bookmarking this. I really wish there was an alert so I can get reviews.

Love the hell out of this; I really like how it's AU, how Cloud is coming in terms, and how all of the characters are played. It's really well done.

Plus topping Cloud? How original is that! Seriously!

If you had crossdressing!Cloud I think I would die in enjoyment. I'm still re reading this story.
person kyoko
schedule February 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
heh nice work so far
person Jen
schedule February 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far this is a really interesting story. I am curious how this will all play out when and if Seph gets his memories back. Oh the two of them together will then handle the situation. Also how Vincent will deal with the reality of a childlike general. Thanks for sharing and I am looking forward to more in the future. Hope you had a good weekend.
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like your fanfic good work
person Night XIV
schedule February 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! I was right ^^ I never thought Vincent to be the angry type, so at first I thought it was Reno, but I knew it was Vincent. This chapter was cute...in the end. I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder what'll happen once Seph gets his memories back
And I know what you mean about the whole ff.net thing with submitting stories. Sometimes it happens to me, but not too often.
person Night XIV
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
woot!~ An update. I was reading this on ff.net lately and I was surprised to see an update on here instead.
Ooh, I wonder who it is that's trying to shoot Sephy. I have this feeling that it might be Reno or Vincent.
I can't wait for the next chapter