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I have to admit I really enjoyed this the scenes were very well written as far as the sexual aspect, but it was as the characters personality which I found rather intriguing. I could honestly see hope reacting in this fashion as his emotions never seem to be expressed in a calm manner but more explosive. I would definitely be interested in reading more chapters. Thanks for the awesome post.

What I like about this story is that it's essentially a reverse rape story, or about as close to one as you can get. Then there's the added benefit of Hope and Nora being mother and son, which adds a forbidden fruit type of element to it. I love the way you captured Hope's reactions to this whole situation, it fits with what I'd picture actually happening in a situation such as this, and that makes the story even more appealing.

For the actual sex scene, I do believe that it could have been longer, and have more description, as well as have more things going on than Nora simply riding Hope. However, for a start, I don't picture this as being too bad.

I have to admit, I don't care for chapter 2 at all. Hope raping Nora completely took away any of the forbidden fruit appeal to the story, because now both participants are willing parties. That, and what made the first chapter so good (Hope's reluctance, confusion, and mental turmoil of the event happening) is now gone.

To be honest, I'd like to see an ongoing version of this story with Hope still in mental turmoil over this event, and instead of being angry at Nora, he simply remains confused and even afraid of being around her, lest she decide to engage in sexual intercourse with him yet again. I'd also like to see Nora continue to go after Hope, and doing even more perverse things to and with him, engaging in various different sexual activities with him while Bartholomew isn't around. Hell, maybe even throw in a situation where Nora manages to take Hope away from his father and have him all to herself somewhere else.

I'd actually like that suggestion to be a story request from me to you. I'd really like to see this series continue with Nora being something of a sexual predator to Hope, and Hope continuing to be an unwilling participant.

Shoot me an email if you want further details, or I can just send you one. Whichever you prefer.

Thanks, and great story.

Loved it, five stars.

Got anymore chapters for this? If you do please post them!

Both chapters were good, but I kind of enjoyed Chapter 2 more. Seeing as how Nora had basically raped Hope in Chapter 1, it seemed fitting he'd return the favor in chapter 2. I also enjoyed the idea of Hope being this aggressive, animalistic lover. Its so far out of character for him, that I find it interesting and entertaining.

I would really love to see a chapter 3 where Hope really pounds a pregnant Nora.

Now this is an interesting take on hope's mother. I assume this is before the events of the game(duh), will you continue this? I quite like the story and seeing Hope act a little is always a good thing. The cliffhanger which probably will lead to guilty trips and hopefully some delicious make up sex afterwards.
Looking forward to it, and other XIII fics from you.

Chap 2 was welcome. Not sure it had to be rape-y. Hope just could have decided he enjoyed having sex with Nora so he was going to keep on doing it. As far as the Behemoth anatomy question, please no snuff/gore. The behemoth does not have to be so well hung as to cause that (not all animals are super endowed even if they are large; gorillas for example are small down there). Second the characters are superhumanly strong and tough by the time they get to Pulse so there is no reason they could not take a real pounding. I suppose if none of these arguments sway you a smaller monster could be used...but I like the Behemoth.

SailorNemesis

I liked this chapter, and I'd like to see more things like it.

For a suggestion, how about you have Lightning come across them, and gets forced into a threesome? And maybe from there, he decides to Fang and Vanille to his little group?

Hope to see more.

Very sexy. Would like to see Hope take charge in the morning. As far as other stories, how about Light/Van/Fang raped by Behemoths on Pulse? Or else getting impregnated by NeoChu? All those little ones have to come from somewhere...
SailorNemesis

I always hoped to see this pairing, since incest is one of my favorites. And hell if you didn't deliver here. It was great, thank you.