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One of the best final fantasy stories I have ever read.....I want this to be how the game was....it would be soooo much better....I wonder if they would consider putting your story as an alternate game lol :)

awesome story i've read this story at least a hundred times, it's that good, love your writing style and hopefully you'll be back to write a new chapter *hint hint*. I love how it goes from a seph/gen/sloud threesome to a tseng/cloud relationship, love it all so new chapter soon pls and thank you for taking the time to read this review

your fan, mooka26

OK so I have tried being really,really patient but I can't wait...PLEASE UPDATE!!! lol sorry had to get that out...I absolutely love this story, it is my favorite so far and really can't wait to see where it goes from chap 25...to tell you how much I have loved this story, I have re-read it like 4 times so far, and still want to re-read it, so I really, really hope that you have a new chapter soon. Love Ya! :)

I really like your story. It's very funny with a good amount of drama that keeps it interesting.

I love this story :D It's extremely cute and i like the fact that you portray the soldiers to be so human although it put me for a loop for a moment (and a few chapters) because Sephiroth seemed so young (the other's i can understand since Zack is a puppy anyways, it doesn't really matter what age he is physically, he's still a hyperactive puppy... and Gen and 'Geal are pretty in character, plus they're older, sephiroth is the only one that seems too young lol but i still like it^^). I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! Please update soon! I hope that Tseng gets to kick his father's butt and throw him off a cliff or something *vicious grin* I also wonder what his reaction will be when evil bastard dad realizes that not only is is son the director of the Turks but also the lover of one of the Firsts?

Clara

ps. Tseng's mom is totally cool!

pps. Is Vincent going to meet any of his family members in Wutai?

Very nice story, I really like it.
I was enjoying every single chapter and I hope you will continue.

I enjoy your story it actually has a plot along with the yaoi sex, like what you do with the characters in FF-7
personalites too, also the story has as much humor, pathos, and exciting drama that anyone could want. Have you ever consider writing for a living...perhaps your military background has influenced your writing abilities.

Your a better writer than most AFF, all the best, Gslinger

Love this story! It's like crack! I'm addicted!!!!! Can't wait for the next part!

Well...this story. Where to start. Okay, first thing, Cloud's mother's name is April, not Emma. No big, just pointing it out. And I have to say, I'm so torn over this story. I don't know if I like it or not, and that's rare for me. It's very conflicting because while I like it as just a cute story, I've always had a hard time with three-way couples. My opinion on it changes from chapter to chapter, but I have no final verdict.

Ahhh, that was very enjoyable to read. *sighs happily* I look forward to more from you. :3