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for Party of Three

by Slayzer

person ErotiChi
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice and hot! I've barely started FF13 & 13-2, but I like the do-able-ness of the characters. Serah has every right to get her some man meat after Snow dumped her. Your story was so realistic that I hope Serah decides this is the life she wants to live and makes sure she gets some every day ^_^
person JViper
schedule March 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Been enjoying your ff xiii fics. Really agree with your opinion on Serah waiting for Snow. And there definitely were some sparks with Serah and Hope.
Keep up the good work, and if you find it in yourself do a series with Serah rebelling against Lighting/Snow because the way they just leave Serah felt wrong in my opinion.
Anyway Like your style, hope to see more from you.
schedule February 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not bad at all! Could have used a but more proofreading, but hey, it's good smut!