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I love evrything about this story please write more, your doing great!

This is one of the best fanfictions, I happened to read. I read the whole story in just one night and hope, you find it in your heart to continue the story. It is just soooooo good.
Thank you for sharing!

This is such a great fic,I knew it wouldn't have updated it forever, it's the unspoken law of great fanfic I guess. Still love it. Great work.

Hey! I really love this story! The characters really come to life for me and I'm really interested in seeing how the story will progress. Are you going to finish this story? I read and re-read this story every couple of months hoping that there might be an update. If you decide that you won't finish this story, that's okay too, I'll just have to dream up the ending myself...Thanks for the great story!

Hey TokiMirage,

I see it's been nearly a year since I last browsed the reviews. I've stopped by only to say I've read the existing chapters now for the 10th or 12th time. This is hands down my favorite story in years and years. I'm still hoping you'll come back and update it. You have a lot of fans.

Aerawyn

please, please, please update *Zack puppy dog eyes*. This is such a good story.

Me again. Chapter twelve was a slugger. "The Little Guy" has proven itself to be easy to read, fun, engaging, and overall very well written. I can't wait for an update. Keep up the good work!

I am getting far more of a kick out of this than I thought I would. Granted, I'm a sucker for "going back in time" fics, but this has such an original take on it. He's not using the chance to better himself, but to have a life... Which you already know, but still. It's so much more realistic than the blinding loyalty to the overall plot that a lot of people have. Instead your loyal to the characters, which is a breath of fresh air.

Up to chapter six, now. Still enjoying this far more than I should be. I haven't enjoyed a story this much in a long time. *Grin* Also, that song you linked one or two chapters ago was fantastic, as well. Anywho, I really love Shuo for some reason, even though he's only being mentioned vaguely. I kind of hope he comes up late, although he probably won't.. Heck, I'd love to read about his time in Wutai, period. It sounds so fascinating. Granted, you have this mysterious ability that makes reading about changing a lightbulb interesting. Quite a feat. Great work thus far. I'm definitely going to keep reading.

TokiMirage,

Looking over your reviews, it looks like everyone agrees with me: That your writing is amazing and your storyline is beyond words. It's so incredible.

I hope we can implore you to take up your keyboard again. What will it take to see the next development in this story unfold?