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Very good story

This is a really hot story. Is chapter 7 the last chapter? Cause I would love to read a chapter about the daily life of the four breeding bitches. Of course that would probably be almost pure smut, no plot, but that's fine, right?

Very nice to read chap 7. Sorry it's over but I understand. Looking forward to more stories from you.

I absolutely love this story and am patiently waiting for chapter 7 any idea when it might be up.

Read chap6; very nice. Creative scene with Paine bound at the beginning. I was going to suggest you add Lulu, but it seems you got there yourself. Maybe also Capt.Alma (I think) of the chocobo knights. Very glad to see the chap finally posted, looking forward to more.

I'm likeing your work a great deal. You do a good job of describing the action without over doing it (and letting excessive wording detract from the actual action, thus killing the mood). Really hope you keep adding to this supposed 'one-shot', would like to see Paine be the hardest one to break, really live up to her name and tough girl rep. There is just one thing that irks me, and it's not just you, so many authors are guilty of this, but a woman's cervix, particularly a primip (had no children), is not some that dicks get pushed through. The cervix is a tight knot of muscle closed tighter than a fist, if you want that thing to open wider than just letting sperm in (without using dilators, small metal rods that increase in diameter, and take a fair amount of time to work (and that's only to get a cervix wide enough to fit Maccas straw sized tools through)), you need labour hormones streaming through the woman's body (good luck getting near a woman with your cock then). Sorry about that, but med students get hung up on silly things (I'm sure science or engineering students have to bite their tongue when the go to the cinema half the time to).
To any prospective readers who seek the opinion of others before investing their time in reading a story (... It could still happen here), if you like the fictional rape and gangbang of captive women, with a bit of tentacle rape on the side, than read this, you don't need to be familiar with FFX2 to appreciate this

I'm likeing your work a great deal. You do a good job of describing the action without over doing it (and letting excessive wording detract from the actual action, thus killing the mood). Really hope you keep adding to this supposed 'one-shot', would like to see Paine be the hardest one to break, really live up to her name and tough girl rep. There is just one thing that irks me, and it's not just you, so many authors are guilty of this, but a woman's cervix, particularly a primip (had no children), is not some that dicks get pushed through. The cervix is a tight knot of muscle closed tighter than a fist, if you want that thing to open wider than just letting sperm in (without using dilators, small metal rods that increase in diameter, and take a fair amount of time to work (and that's only to get a cervix wide enough to fit Maccas straw sized tools through)), you need labour hormones streaming through the woman's body (good luck getting near a woman with your cock then). Sorry about that, but med students get hung up on silly things (I'm sure science or engineering students have to bite their tongue when the go to the cinema half the time to).
To any prospective readers who seek the opinion of others before investing their time in reading a story (... It could still happen here), if you like the fictional rape and gangbang of captive women, with a bit of tentacle rape on the side, than read this, you don't need to be familiar with FFX2 to appreciate this

Very happy to see the chap5 update. I enjoyed the delirium sequence at the beginning with futa-Yuna. The cousin-cest was fun also. Looking forward to the girls helping to initiate Pain. Should be fun watching the Ronso break Pain. As always, looking forward to the girls having pregnant sex with big round bellies. I'm sure Riku will enjoy drinking from Yunnie also. Hope to read more soon.

Please continue that last chapter was hot!!!

I really hope you'll continue this great story and YPR will join each other as Ronso breeding whores. It'd be cool to see them being kept in the line, with their pussies stuffed and their fat bellies filled with Ronso spawn.