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November 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please continue! while reading your last Bleach story, I couldn't contain my excitement thinking of Yuna, Rikku and Paine being ravished in the same way by hordes of horny ronso.
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September 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Can't wait for more.
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September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Nice update! I really am becoming a fan of your work.
I really like the whole dominance thing the Rondo got going in this fic. Can't wait to see more with all three girls.
Keep up the good work!
I really like the whole dominance thing the Rondo got going in this fic. Can't wait to see more with all three girls.
Keep up the good work!
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September 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! I have been waiting so long for this but it was worth it. So good to see another chap of this. Taming Paine's butt was definitely the right way to start. Your description of what's coming up sounds great. Really hoping to see more of this soon.
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June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was fuckin' great story. I really hope Paine will join Yuna as Ronso slut, while Rikku became Marlborro breeding bitch.
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to the next chapter.
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and if you allow me a little advice: why don't you put more ambient, movement and body descriptions when the smut is going on? It does wonders to the color and sexiness of the scene. Going for a full sensorial experience, instead of remaining solely with the classic porn camera angles.
Just a suggestion. Keep going, your stories are great
Just a suggestion. Keep going, your stories are great
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November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great start. Hope to see Yuna get pregnant.
These stories are always weird for me. On the one hand, I want to see the girls escape their predicament and get a 'happy' ending.
On the other hand, the smut they go through is so enjoyable.
Keep up the good work!
These stories are always weird for me. On the one hand, I want to see the girls escape their predicament and get a 'happy' ending.
On the other hand, the smut they go through is so enjoyable.
Keep up the good work!
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November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This just gets better with each chapter, 5 stars. Love the pace it's going at and your ability to write smut is superb. like that Yuna is still resisting and wonder how Rikku will fare. I guess at this point Paine is our 2 lovely ladies last chance at escape, that is if they even want to escape by the time Paine makes an appearance and aren't broken ;D.
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November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad I decided to check the ff section today. I've been hoping someone would make a fic like this since playing the mt gagazet story in ffx-2. I'm really loving this story so far and it's pretty unique, haven't seen a fic with this plot before. I hope you continue.