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Holyyy... it has been some time since I have read some ffvii fan fiction, but holy he'll what a story to come back to! I am not sure if I am more in love with what is happening between Cloud and Seph or if I am obsessed with the technical 3some that just happened between VincentXSephXCloud. I hope more of those three are planned. Seph though my favvie Dom ever just got overshadowed by Vincent. My God he makes me wanna fall to my knees and call him Daddy lol. I about cried when I realized i just ran out of chapters lol. I am definitely looking forward to the next update!

Okay, so I have never before reviewed a story on here before. I just haven't. You are the first to actually inspire me do this, and it's not even the sort of story I usually enjoy. Normally, I've never been one for Cloud/Sephiroth relationships, much less Sephiroth/Zack. I don't usually like Sephiroth as a bottom, but this story. . . . I'm quickly changing my mind. First of all, I absolutely love and adore Vincent Valentine as such a powerful dominant. Seriously. I want to write a story with this version of him, but I just know it wouldn't come out correctly. The psychology is a very interesting mix, and I feel like reading your other works just because of it. I am, personally, fascinated by psychology, and this is completely playing to that little quirk of mine. I love Lightning, as always, and although the Cloud gender-swap is not my normal style either, I am surprisingly enjoying it.
Anyway, all in all, the writing is above par for most stories on this site that I've seen, the story-line is very intriguing, and I love your Vincent so much that he's probably going to end up influencing some of my own male leads. You're awesome.

You have a interesting and unique story line and I hope that you continue to update.

i am absolutely loving this fic. i can wait for Cloud to get his plan together and see the results.

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