What a pleasant surprise! I was not expecting to see a new chapter on this story. I was already resigned that you moved on or something, since so many writers come and go like that. Guess that serves as a lesson to not give up =D
Fantastic work on Serah's allure here. It feels like the perfect complement AU to the main story. Personally, I prefer the tease you went through in the earlier chapters, but it's really great to get a glimpse, or maybe a look if you're planning more, at what would happen had Hope not resisted the temptation that the Farron "sisters" are, Lumina being the odd case, though she's obviously a Farron.
It's been a long time since I've read Serah's original chapter, but if we can assume that only Hope's reaction changed it really makes that chapter even hotter.
Anyway, really happy that you're back. You're one of the best writers in the FF13 fandom and on the tease/denial/slow build erotica. So it's a godsend to have you write more.
Hope to read more soon!
Jviper
What a way to return. Welcome back Drake!
please write more of this
Could easily see a chapter in the future when everyone has gotten pregnant being a fun read.
There were misspelled words I saw here and there but it didn't disrupt the flow of the story too much.
I don't know if you intend on continuing but if you do xD I definitely will read & review hahaha Lumina hand-cuffing Hope is just too hilarious for me.